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Title: cuteblueangel2001@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: AlotTears On: September 26, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great!! Continue Please!!!
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Reviewed By: BRONIE BITE On: February 04, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVED IT!I REALLY DONT CARE ABOUT KIKYO SHE CAN DIE 4 ALL I CARE ha ha ha ^_^.BUT I LUV THE INUYASHA GETTING KIND OF GELIOUS OF KAGOME AND SESSHAMAOURA WELL I THINK HE WAS.ALL I WANT TO SEE IS BOYZ (SESS,INU,HOJO,MIR,ANDKOUGA ^_~)FIGHTING OVER KAGOME THEN ILL WORSHIP U ^_^.WELL N E WAYZ LETS GET BACK TO THE POINT AND HURRY UP AND FINNISH THE STORY BEFORE I KILL MYSELF( THAT WHAT THESE NON FINNISHED FAN FICS DO 2 ME ^_^.)E-MAIL ME WHEN UR FINNISHED AT BRONIE BITE@AOL.COM |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang! This is really good. I feel really embarrased now because your story is great. I'm interested from beginning til end. Please finish. It's true that there aren't alot of nice fics about Kikyo. I'll admit that I wasn't fond of her myself in the beginning but your story and a recent episode showed me that she's not bad. She just need love, that's all. Now hurry up.*giggle*. I'm just playing, anyways I'll be waiting for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo, wow that was intense. i feel special you responded to me in your chapter. anyway, i do see what you mean in regards to kikyo and kagome. i think most fanfic writers avoid making them friends because the author themselves dispises kikyo so much. i know i myself admittedly can't write a fic with kikyo in it because she annoys me so much. but i don't mind reading other fics with her in it. it's really immature to be so stuck on an impression like that, but i can't help it. although the way you're writing kikyo is just spectacular. i've never read a fic that goes this in depth with her before, and i find it very interesting to read. because almost no one ever writes a fic with anything from kikyo's point of view. most just use her as a faceless plot device and that's all. the amount of development yuo've put into her is impressive. because it's so different it leaves me wondering how she'll react next, and how your story will turn, because your writing is very original and a nice new breath of air in my opinion to all those fics that are being written so often in my opinion they're starting to bog each other down in their similarity.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Xtreme Nuisance [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
um... is that the end?? if it isn't, more plz! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan On: January 01, 2003 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
have i mentioned i love your writing style? it's absolutely great. and this is the first fic i've read where kagome and kikyo are actually good friends. i think it is an interesting way of writing it. please update soon, i want to see what happens now.
Mara |
Reviewed By: britt On: December 29, 2002 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good fic and i can't wait for the next chapter to come out |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 14:15 CST
Comment/Review:
*exhales at least* phew, that chapter was intense. my compliments. it was probably intense for me because i can relate to kikyo in this. ah well, you did a good job, i'm going to keep an eye open for your updates, so please do so soon!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Evarina On: December 28, 2002 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word to discribe your fic I'd say BEAUTIFUL. |
Reviewed By: dannielle On: December 26, 2002 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
wow....this fic...just....wow... i love it.... i cant wait till u update more.... u need to fix ur little typos but its still a great fic.... sadness.... |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai Forever (to lazy to sign in! On: December 26, 2002 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! it's so great words can't express it!
and you are right there are not a lot of good ff !
if it was a grade it would be an A or 100! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
i don't think you have a problem with characterization. the way you wrote inuyasha was cool. not enough people write inuyasha as a true bad ass. and if they do they don't do it _well_ like you did. i absolutely love this fic. christmas may have in spired it but i hope you plan on keep writing this after the season. i'm bookmarking this fic and will be checking daily for updates so you better not disappoint me.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
i don't think you have a problem with characterization. the way you wrote inuyasha was cool. not enough people write inuyasha as a true bad ass. and if they do they don't do it _well_ like you did. i absolutely love this fic. christmas may have in spired it but i hope you plan on keep writing this after the season. i'm bookmarking this fic and will be checking daily for updates so you better not disappoint me.
Mara |
Reviewed By: wow On: December 25, 2002 12:03 CST
Comment/Review:
woweez i really liked this fic... super major awesomeness.... what's gonna happen between inu/kag? eeee im waiting for the next chappy! |
Reviewed By: cynical virgin On: March 18, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOTE: this is an actual REVIEW, don't expect that starry-eyed gimme-me-more sh*t, don't worry, I'm really not that critical...i hope -_-;;;
you have a lot of potential with your story ideas but I guess it takes awhile before the presentation of them catches up...I hope I'm not being to harsh here...maybe it's because I'm in college and expect more...?
some more things:
your characterization is pretty good. I say this because I don't believe that Kikyo would react like that. We've seen how she handles betrayal, and it's not curling up in a corner with a big bowl of cookie dough ice cream and crying her heart out (figurtively speaking of course) but Kagome and Inu Yasha were done well ^_^
dialogue: this is one of my major pet peeves...the scene where Kagome confronts Inu Yasha...actually the use of the term "genital", normally when you're dissing a man's member you won't use the more..."polite way" of saying it (but I'm Texan, so it might not be like that where you're from) Read a really bad lemon and you'll find all sorts of slang and derogatory terms for it
that's all, sorry for being such a nagging bitch
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