| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 03:22 CST
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Well that's one way to take out the Ken factor. Although I must confess I was surprised it was just an Aya-Ken-Schu chapter, especially given the bombshell in chapter 16.
Very nice. Aya was obviously a dumbbell for not letting Ken know her plans ahead of time. Ken is a dumbbell for not checking out the facts (he could have turned up for the wedding and found out the truth).
Schu wasn't too dastardly in this part. But get back to Yoji and Ran soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: saiyaski On: March 27, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how kawaii is that have you ever considred making your own novel? you should really think about it, ne? well keep up the good work, ja!!! |
Reviewed By: OpusAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 17:11 CST
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I love how you set things up in this story. Crossdressing Aya, hehe. Now get that next part out already, things were just starting to get good! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: jahan On: March 24, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply wounderful |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 15:20 CST
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Just what is it about Aya-chan that fascinates Schuldig? Okay you don't like Ken and he's not going to get her ultimately, but he should still turn up somewhere in this. Even if you want to write him as an idiot and have Aya-chan 'see the light'. ^__^
Poor Ran, Yoji should tell him that he knows Ran is a guy and put the guy out of his misery.
I'm still enjoying this fic. Hope you post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 11:32 CST
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good chapter, but wai! so short... and you have to end it right there... i want to see yohji's reaction *pouts fiercely* i am _so_ not amused. you better start coming out with more chapters or else... i'll sick all the rabid weiss fangirls on you! >. |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:06 CST
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^_^ Hey! You've updated!!! Sorry, I couldn't read it directly when you'd posted those two last chapters. Man, the chapter were Ran was bathing XP Youji knows?!!! That part was kinda little steamy and stuff, but I like it ^_^ He's taking revenge? A sweet one or a very very painful one?? The last chapter was HER?!! Gee... she is kinda scary. I've guessed the wrong person -_-' ::cries in a corner:: I've guessed wrong!!
The last chapter was kinda short too -_-' darn! But anyways, I'm glad you've updated ^_^ I love the fic, even if it really gets a little steamy... AND Schuldig is scaring me for some reasons. Poor Aya ;_;. Someone save her!!! Anyways, keep it up!! Nice work!! |
Reviewed By: Sara-chan On: March 17, 2003 08:28 CST
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you update!I'm so glad to see a new chapter.
(Cheers madly) |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
AARGH! Shoulda KNOWN it would be Neu/Asuka. Got that as soon as her hair color was mentioned in this chapter, don't know why I didn't pick up on it before.
Schuldig is CRACKING ME UP here. |
Reviewed By: Pegah On: March 12, 2003 08:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic and and I love you for writing it.
can't wait to see what's coming next!
oh and by the way chapter 14 was damn good!
didn't expect that!!!! |
Reviewed By: Laguna On: March 12, 2003 03:31 CST
Comment/Review:
who gonna save Ran?
and who gonna save Aya?
muahahah... XD
this is getting interesting.
updated soon ok. |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 09:10 CST
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! I'm so sorry!!! Waaaaa ;_; I suck... and beg your pardon for this horrible mistake!!! *goes changing da chapter* told ya, English's not my first language ^^°.. about da other questions... someone else already asked me, why Youji wanted to marry, that badly... I thought about some possibilities and think, that he was really bored, wanted to make a big change in his lifestyle and/or wanted to get rid of the "misterious person" by marrying... about Mr. Takatori... I actually thought about writing a scene, where a servant tells him about what happened or Aya (the real one) crossing his path, but in the end I didn't, because I thought the readers might have figured out, how important that marriage was to him and that he'd know for sure, if anything's going wrong.. well, I'm sorry for my mistake and hope, I didn't insult nor confuse anyone ^^° ejejejeje... Thank you very much for telling me my mistakes; please tell me, if you see anything else! |
Reviewed By: Nirvana-chan On: March 10, 2003 11:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I had a wonderful weekend with it.
It's so Sweet. I can't have enough of it.
Please up date soon.
I wish you could manege longer chapters.
reading this fiction is SOOOOOO fun |
Reviewed By: Sahel On: March 10, 2003 10:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic. I enjoyed it a lot. esp.chap.14
that was so unexpected!
Hope you up date soon. |
Reviewed By: Hope On: March 10, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saaaaa, that was great! I'm curious to see what will happen when Ran finds out that Yohji knows, and what's gonna happen to Aya-chan? o.o Can't wait for another installment!!!!! |
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