| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shinigami On: February 01, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hold on a sec! I haven't seen the anime, and I cannot find any mention of the manga translated, and cannot find them in the local comic shops. Believe me, I have tried, but no luck... Kuso! *curses out loud into Japanese* Gomen nasai. Anyway, I thought they were green, Forsaken's site says they are jade green in the anime and dark green in the manga. So either Forsaken made a mistake or the anime artists screwed up...*grins at the scene with Aya and Schuldich* Way to go, Aya! *whoops and cheers* Schu, Aya might be a crossdresser, but she happens to be engaged to someone else... So Jei/Farfie's in this, along with Omi and Schu... Who else? *muses* Hold on, seven pairs of eyes looked at Aya when she walked in the room after leaving Schu with a brusied cheek... *smirks* I know, I know I'm evil, but Schu deserves it after acting like a know-it-all and hitting on her...Anyway, 7 pairs of eyes, there's Omiitchi, Yotan, Ran and Jei. So that leaves 3 people unccounted for. Hm, prehaps Ken, Nagi and Brad? Pls bring in Schreient. Cuz I so want to see Neu/Asuka in this! So there's a possiblity that Yotan knows about Ran's being a guy, eh? *winces* The wedding night should be interesting! Have someone ever explained to Ran about the birds and the bees?*snickering* Damn! Schuldich's a telepath? I thought this was an althernate universe fanfic, I know this is the 1800s and all, but yet... |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I love it! Very cute! And sweet!
A ten for your style, juist love the flow of the story ^_^
A ten for grammar, I didn't notice any mistakes, if there is -_- I'm too captured in your story.
A ten for creativity, ^_^ Like I said, it's cute, I like that one when they're acting so playfully...
I wonder who's the taller guy... or man. Ken ? or Brad ?
Please update soon! Keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: olive On: January 27, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey we still read this and its a trip, don't stop or the curiosity will kill me, and I've already used too many lives to count. |
Reviewed By: olive On: January 27, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey we still read this and its a trip, don't stop or the curiosity will kill me, and I've already used too many lives to count. |
Reviewed By: Sylph On: January 27, 2003 01:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Schu in here! I love his entrance. Though I prefer him with green eyes (like in the manga). I wanna see how Ran will talk himself out of this one. He's GOT to realize that Youji isn't a baka by now...right? Well...go make more mess. This is great! |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 22:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Yep still reading. Now the last bit had me pondering but I think I know who it may be. Hee. I wish Aya would just let Yohji know about his little secret soon. I mean of course Yohji knows (or does he not?), he cant be that much of a baka. Anyway thanks for the update. |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: January 26, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm still reading! The story is very interesting. I'm enjoying it much. The only thing I'm unclear on is how *Aya* thinks he can continue deceiving Kudoh. Shouldn't Aya be very worried about the upcoming wedding? I mean, sooner or later (probably sooner) Kudoh WILL find out... |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 26, 2003 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Just saw your response saying it wasn't Omi....could it be Schuldig?? |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 26, 2003 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, who was that at the end? Takatori? Wonder where Yohji and Aya were... Hmm, could Yohji's friends be Omi and/or Ken? *ponders* I can't wait 'till Ran finds out Yohji knows he's a man! *grin* |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 26, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes widen* Sounds like Yotan's mystery friend knows Ran's a X-dresser! I'm confused, I cannot find any hints that Yotan knows about 'Aya' being Ran! If there are any, pls point them out to me! And I dunno on the man with blue eyes. Only ones I know with blue eyes are Omi and Nagi, and the last time I checked Ran was taller than them! |
Reviewed By: Merigold On: January 26, 2003 00:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Eeeeeeeeeeeee! Update! As always, I want more.. fast... ^^;; OOOOOOOOoooo, Mr. Blue Eyes knows somethin' |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 20, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm...was it Omi that got the invitation??
Another great chapter! I think it'll be so funny when Ran finds out Yohji already knows he's a man... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Way too short! The Schu and Aya scene needed to be fleshed out more. And dang it the massage scene needed to be longer as well. I do enjoy this fic otherwise. |
Reviewed By: Merigold [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooo! I think Yohji knowwwwwsssssssssssss.... hehe, it looks like he's just having some fun now ^^ Great job! |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 14, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks into confusion* I'm confused! Does Yotan knows that Ran and Aya switched places? If he does, he's being awful mean to Aya, shopping indeed! |
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