| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Merigold On: January 26, 2003 00:56 CST
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Eeeeeeeeeeeee! Update! As always, I want more.. fast... ^^;; OOOOOOOOoooo, Mr. Blue Eyes knows somethin' |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 20, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm...was it Omi that got the invitation??
Another great chapter! I think it'll be so funny when Ran finds out Yohji already knows he's a man... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 22:30 CST
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Way too short! The Schu and Aya scene needed to be fleshed out more. And dang it the massage scene needed to be longer as well. I do enjoy this fic otherwise. |
Reviewed By: Merigold [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 21:48 CST
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Ooooooooooo! I think Yohji knowwwwwsssssssssssss.... hehe, it looks like he's just having some fun now ^^ Great job! |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 14, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks into confusion* I'm confused! Does Yotan knows that Ran and Aya switched places? If he does, he's being awful mean to Aya, shopping indeed! |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 20:27 CST
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Bitch on wheels Asuka and dastardly Schu all in one chapter? BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Scary woman indeed. Very cute ... now you have to get Ken in the act or doesn't he care that his fiancee is missing? |
Reviewed By: Sylph On: January 08, 2003 13:42 CST
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Heehee...chapter 5 was fun. So when will the bubble pop? Youji is so mean playing with Ran and Aya while he know what's going on. Wicked!! Good luck with exams then write more. |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 00:57 CST
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Great! You've updated again. Thanks heaps. I do hope Yohji will find out about Ran's little secret soon. Although one suspect he already knows.
And unless you're gonna give us a juicy lemon somewhere in the future, I'm sure PG-13 is fine for now. *nudge nudge* Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 05, 2003 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the scene where Ran tripped into bed and Youji wouldn't let him go right away. So good ^_^ I liked when Youji called Aya a "good little boy" as well. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max On: January 05, 2003 22:36 CST
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What da ya mean take awhile to update?!?!? ::glares:: I told you I wasn't patient! ::sighs in defeat:: Oh fine! But I hope that the next chapter is longer! You really have me hooked on this ya know.
Oh well, hope school doesn't keep you too busy (I know it will me). Now hurry up with the next chapter all ready! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 04, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeh, he didn't find out yet! *laughs* The next chapter will be fun, sleeping in the same bed, hehe. -^^- |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 16:26 CST
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This really is a very cute, sweet story. Give us more. :) |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 04:44 CST
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*smiles* The snoring bit was funny. Poor Ran, probably getting harassed by Yohji's feet. Thanks for the update. It's too short. As Aisha said, we need more. You've got me hooked in this fic already.
Oh and *wraps your head* don't injured yourself. I need you clear-headed to continue the story. *smirk* |
Reviewed By: alternative On: January 04, 2003 00:21 CST
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This is so cute and funny plz update as soon as possible! I can't wait until Yohji finds out his bride is a man.. lol |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max On: January 04, 2003 00:17 CST
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AAAAhhhh!!!!! That was too short!!!! And now I have to be patient and wait for another one! I'm not patient!!! ::pouts:: Okay so I'll wait. Update soon! I'll be watching for it! ^_^ |
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