| "Confessions of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: =D On: January 03, 2003 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
o wow...this is a really cute story...i love inuyasha kagome pairings... inuyashsa is being so sweet...i just wanna hug him!...err ok...so yea good fic...keep up the good work yadda yadda yadda yadda |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. The story has a plot with love in it. I also like you OC. Will Kagome become a hanyou I think she should. Please write more |
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. There is romance, without being mushy, and there is an actual story, not just the lemon (which I can't wait for, might I add). I like the way you've taken the obvious (for me anyway) feelings between IY and Kagome, and taken them on to what I feel is a natural conclusion. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luver On: January 02, 2003 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great, can't wait till the next part, I think how they keep calling eachother my love, and mate makes them sound out of charactor, maybe u shouldn't put that in your next one |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 01:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey i like the fic and would love to read more especally the lemon!!!!! :P So update soon, K!?
~luv ya~ |
Reviewed By: Mr_Vampire On: December 31, 2002 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this one of the very best Inu Yasha fics I've read in a long time. Please update as soom as posible. I also think that is one of your better fics, but that maybe because i like Inu Yasha better than sailor moon. Again update ASAP PLEASE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: December 30, 2002 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First things first: I really did enjoy this fic. However, there were a few things which I felt should be pointed out. First, Inuyasha never attaches honorifics to anyone's names; therefore, he would never say "Sango-chan" or "Kagome-chan". Second, because Inuyasha is basically portrayed as unrefined and rude, he would not speak without using contractions (I'll admit this is nitpicky, but it was noticeable that you tend not to use contractions). Finally, I found the scenario to be a bit rushed--but that could just be me.
Please don't mistake this for a flame. All in all, I thought this was a good fic and I enjoyed reading it. I'm really glad you're extending your writing from the Sailor Moon fandom over to Inuyasha! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: grrr On: December 29, 2002 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
grrrrrrr wheres the rest?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: December 29, 2002 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! Please add more soon!! :) |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: December 29, 2002 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST ADD MORE SOON! *falls over*
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUAAA!!!!!!! THAT'S WHERE YOU LEFT IT!?! EVIL PURE EVIL!!!!! Please, please, PLEASE write more soon. |
Reviewed By: miaka-chan On: December 28, 2002 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please!!!!! Write more! I love this fic!! ^^ It's extremely well writen and actually has plot to it! I love it! |
Reviewed By: sweetpea On: January 22, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an art for writing Inu Yasha Romance Fan Fic's. Don't Stop. Great Job!! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: December 29, 2002 09:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Not loggid in presently *sigh*
That was soooo kawaii!!! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. Can't wait for more. Especially the lemon part. hehe I wonder though, will Kagome become a hanyou for Inu-Yasha? |
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