"Who She's Been Waiting For" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: TT On: June 14, 2005 12:32 CDT Comment/Review: Add you to favourites, please update!
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Reviewed By: izazel On: February 18, 2003 17:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: it has definate potential |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 11:19 CST Comment/Review: This is a fantastic start to what promises to be an equally fantastic fanfiction. I look forward to seeing more chapters soon.
*hugs*
Ember |
Reviewed By: MajinMe On: January 05, 2003 18:28 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a really great fic so far! I was reading your story (a moment alone, a lifetime to love) on ff.net, and i was HEARTBROKEN to learn that you won't be updating that story soon! But i was happy again when i heard about this story, and it is truly terriffic! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Meow On: January 02, 2003 11:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is really interesting so far. It's a cool idea for them to be stuck in space together, and it'll be interesting to see how long it takes Bulma to get over her fear of Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 02, 2003 01:31 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey really interesting so far please continue |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 15:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi,wussup? Anyways pretty good fic, holla next chappie. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 22:30 CST Comment/Review: wonderful and very original idea for a fic! ^^ but yea, make sure you make Bulma fiesty or have her yelling at Vejita ^^ -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: Kari-chan On: December 29, 2002 20:11 CST Comment/Review: It is an okay fanfic. It's good to have some different stories and not just the same old BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! Just make sure she gets more feisty or somethin. GEESH! |
Reviewed By: MaraKraus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 18:31 CST Comment/Review: Kewl ideal. Hope Bulma doesn't stay all whimpy for to many chapters. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 20:39 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: woo cool chap. neat idea sending her stuff through an invention. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: G>J> On: December 31, 2002 13:21 CST Comment/Review: hey i gotta admit i am ususally 4 da fights but this fic has a gr8 start and it sounds interesting. itz different that most other B/V which is definatly a good thing. (i hope she surprises him and screams at him like she did 2 Yamcha (basicly when he leasts expects it)) |