| "Rebirth: A Sesshoumaru and Rin Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: darei On: June 02, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very....angsty. Would anyone ever believe that little, innocent Rin would kill herself? Or do such naughty things with Sesshoumaru?
Well, I found your fic really enjoyable. It was unique, poetic even, and you portrayed the characters very well. I'm still shocked at how Sesshoumaru...was...nice? Wow...
Anyways, good fic! Keep up the writing! |
Reviewed By: Denial On: April 25, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. um...yea, wow.
Well, that was not something I had ever considered for those two. Congrates on blowing me away. Rin killed herself? Man.
Okay, yea, I know I'm not being too coherent right now. Shock.
But it was a great story. You had some wonderful imagery and the characters were wonderfully protrayed with so little dialog. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: February 23, 2003 20:03 CST
Comment/Review:
"I cannot remember my lord Sesshoumaru ever speaking in such a tender, relaxed tone" *snicker* yup, Fluffy just needed to get laid. Love this fic! Wonderful mix of angst and sweet, sweet romance. Hope there's more in the future! |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: December 31, 2002 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was sad that she had to die to live forever, so that she could be with her Sessomaru, that she will never produce children because of her choice of action to be with her love... |
Reviewed By: Rinchan's flower On: December 30, 2002 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty cool. i liked the death scene (god that makes me sound so suicidal) but i liked the tone of the fic, very good, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Kima On: December 30, 2002 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty smooth fic. I know I liked it. |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: December 31, 2002 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty damn good fic. Can't help liking fics like this. |
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