| "How the Past Can Change" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: DFourthHorseman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always wondered at what would happen if Kaoru with her present state of mind were somehow go into Kenshin's past in a K&K without changing the setting, the story, and their personalities. Though I sorta wish you'd explain why the time travelling occured in the first place, I think its a great, if not the only possible, opening for this story. I really like how the Battousai sorta liked like a schoolboy in love during the meeting, but I felt it was unfair how it was only the original Kenshin who felt all that depression and pain. The only real problem with the way the story was written was that while reading a story like this the readers are sorta torn between liking which Kenshin, and when you try to appease both, you might end up disappointing both, you know what I'm talkin bout? Anywayz, it was such an excellent K&K story, I haven't read one this good for awhile now, please get the rest of the story out. Good luck ne. |
Reviewed By: hiddencharm On: January 27, 2002 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly enjoying this fic, it is entirely different from the ones I have read before and in it's diversity quite amazing! Fun, creative, and you know what... i just like it! In fact, I am waiting eagerly, impatiently, sadly, happily, and rather like any Rk starved fan deprived of their lifeblood... for the next chapter! Hurry Please! |
Reviewed By: Lady Blackdragon On: December 26, 2001 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic. I like to keep things simple. It's well thought out, with enough plot twists to keep me glued to the computer screen just when I start to balance out. The whole Battousai/Kaoru relationship is something I've always wanted to see, because although in the anime, she accepts that part of him, what if he wasn't the shy Rurouni, but the Battousai the whole time? Would she still fall in love with him? Maybe trying to keep it simple why I think this is an awesome fic wasn't a good idea. Because, let me assure you, it IS awesome.
Ja ne,
L.B.D |
Reviewed By: Firuze On: December 02, 2001 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, go on!!!! Hurry up! |
Reviewed By: Keiko-san On: November 28, 2001 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic! Great story, no grammatical bundles to trip in and cliffhangers!! Very good job. Please update soon, like, soon, Please? More, more, more!!! I think I speak for most of us, ne? ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Pastles On: November 27, 2001 02:07 CST
Comment/Review:
eto... hope you don't me not rating this ^^;; ARGH!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU STOPPED AT THAT EXACT MOMENT!!! *grabs Chibi Saitoh-sama (how can one be chibi and a sama at the same time? *shrugs*) and strangles* *Chibi Saitoh-sama ignores crazy girl and lights up a cigarette* ARGH!!! But a new chapter!! *grin* This fic is becoming very interesting... *grin* Continue it! *waves katana dangerously close to head* |
Reviewed By: pastles On: March 26, 2002 01:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh! You've finally updated it!!! *grin* It's been 4 months since I last read your fic... oh... about 6 chapters at a go *is in fanfic heaven* wahahahaha i LIKE!! i especially like your young kenshin!! *grin* and for me... the story that you've got going on about young kenshin and young kaoru... kekeke v. interesting. more! *loves mediaminer for the author updates* |
Reviewed By: meseta On: October 17, 2001 19:47 CDT
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That was so good! Kenshin is a lot more fun when he's only 16 ^_^ But isn't Kaoru gonna get back to the *old* rurouni now? Waht's going to happen now?!? |
Reviewed By: solace_no_tenshi On: November 04, 2001 07:04 CST
Comment/Review:
The story's plot is great, the language is good, the only problem is that you don't write fast enough. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Michiru On: November 04, 2001 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
This is sooo awesome! I know, she's going to go back, now, but you can make it soo interesting! Please please please please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firuze Khanume On: November 07, 2001 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this fanfic. I'm very anxious about how it will end. I've seen it here and in fanfic net too.
Hasta luego!
Firuze |
Reviewed By: Nim On: November 08, 2001 08:39 CST
Comment/Review:
This is still really confusing. It's almost as if Kaoru created an alternate universe for the past Kenshin while her Kenshin still has the same past. Can you explain this? |
Reviewed By: Pastles On: November 08, 2001 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi. Boy am I glad I read this fic first. ^^ It's good. The young Kenshiin is definitely more fun. And I love the way you intergrated the original story into this one. Tho' it is weird how the 'old' Kenshin has no memories of the time the 'young' Kenshin spent with Kaoru. But I do like the way you wrote your story, and the flow of it is nice and smooth. And you didn't hurry your story too fast. ^^ Hope to read more ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 11, 2001 22:50 CST
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C-O-O-L!!! |
Reviewed By: meseta On: November 12, 2001 07:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I see the plot has progresses beyond what I last reviewed and my response is:
Go on! Go on! two more chapters isn't enuff! I'm the only one with the luxury of finishing fanfics after a year ^_^;;
Hey you got a lot more reviews after you put that request on chapter 13 hehe, the ppl here need to be shoved a little, but they're nice. Keep it up and I'm waiting to see whether Kenshin's life changes, maybe he remembers? Oh and I can jsut picture his shock should Kaoru show off her newly found skills. Write more!x100 |
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