| "Echoes of Forgotten Times" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 22:53 CDT
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Great chapter! The tension is really building and you've got me wondering about those wings... |
Reviewed By: Millenia On: February 11, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Yugi is him only with wings now right? I'm slow. -_- Oh well I hope you continue soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 14:23 CST
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YO! UWHOOO! *no one home to write the fanfic* -_- |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 20:24 CST
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Chap. 17 was a bit confusing but eventually got it! Keep going! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 10:42 CST
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Hey can you please give us more please please oh pretty please! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 12:52 CST
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More More More more more more! You *finally* get to the action, and now you leave me to hang like a piece of wet laundry? I think not! This story is wonderfull, really |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 01:07 CST
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Suspenseful cliffhanger for this chapter! Anxiously awaiting the next one... Poor Yugi! |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 09:50 CST
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oh poor yugi! Keep going! |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 23:31 CST
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Hey htis is great! Please hury to the part where Yami and Yugi meet! PLEEEEASE *boobo lip and innocent eyes* |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's a very interesting story, with an intriguing plotline. It's also quite well-written. |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 14:57 CST
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Answering your question: while I'm looking forward to Yami's eventual appearance, I would hate for you to introduce him earlier than the story demands, just to satisfy your readers' expectations. The story should come first! Stick to your plans. |
Reviewed By: Neo-QueenRini On: January 04, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have Isis and Malik mixed up. Please update! I really love your story. |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting; looking forward to reading the rest. |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 12:37 CST
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Hey, I know that monster in chapter ten. That's the Red Archery Girl. It must be. Could you write more? |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 11:59 CST
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Argh! What a place for a cliffhanger! ;) Poor Yugi. Am on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens next! |
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