| "Cynehelme" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taboo On: March 01, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you Z/N are alive and well with the extra passenger. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ***** On: February 28, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best chapter yet. Duo squirming over Hilde and Relena was hiarious. Serves him right. |
Reviewed By: Jason On: February 26, 2003 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't Zech tell Relena he's her brother? Or is he in this story? |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: February 25, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Dorothy should have been club with the branch instead of Relena. Ohhh, she makes the perfect villianess. Love and hate her! |
Reviewed By: ***** On: February 25, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zechs, huh? Figures he'd be show up sooner or later when Relena involved. Best chapter yet. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Little B*tch On: February 25, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally Relena's back with Heero and Dorothy got her tail beaten. Is Dorothy going to stay a bitch or will she be redeemed like in the series? |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: February 25, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero better watch his girl more carefully! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Taboo On: February 25, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dorothy is one twisted chick! And I'm happy Zechs has finally made an appearrance. Great chappie. |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 21, 2003 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, man Heero is so busted! And now Dorothy has made her move. Heero better get Relena back for Treize does. |
Reviewed By: Sally P. Chang On: February 07, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew that evil trick Dorothy would try something! Will she get away with before Heero catches on? Chapter 8 was terrific. |
Reviewed By: J0ey On: February 01, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! You must continue soon,pooleeezz! I beg of you your majesty!lol, dun think I spelled that right, but oh well, ::wave:: please continue and I'll keep reading and reviewing!!
~Joey |
Reviewed By: LirinStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can't tell you how much I am enjoying this fic! I love the long chapters too. They actually have substance too them. I hate it when people send three paragraphs and call it a chapter. You are definately bringing me into the story with each new chapter. As the plot thickens so does the tension. I'm very eager to read new chapters. Please send more soon! |
Reviewed By: Chris On: January 31, 2003 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relena can marry Heero and all will be perfect...yeah, right! What's Treize going to do now? And where's Lady Une? |
Reviewed By: Buck 50 On: January 29, 2003 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Hate Dorothy! Anyway, now that that's off my chest, I hope the next chapter has some more Relena/Heero moments. It's cute how already he's protective of her. |
Reviewed By: Taboo On: January 31, 2003 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Kawaii* Nice chapter. Seems Relena & Heero have become attached to each other already. As for that heifer Dorothy, I hope you write something really unique for her. I hate her, but she's the prefect villian. And I love pairings with her and Quatre. Is she going to get together with Q? |
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