| "Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Umi On: July 18, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Adorable. This story is a great twist on the Inu-hears-Kag-having-wet-dreams plot. I love it, and i hope you do more Inuyasha fics soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good.
that's the first word that came in my mind after reading your fic.
you know, it's not just , the 'good' like in "hum , well, not bad, not excellent, ... well , good..."
no
that 'good' was something that came out of my mouth, as I was standing here , amazed by your work .
you know this feeling, when you're too overwhelmed to say something clear , when you're just able to stutter a word ?
that's it.
go on.
I look forward your others story.
a French Fan |
Reviewed By: angel On: April 12, 2003 17:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was was a great fanfic and i really enjoyed it! it was totally orignal n it was so romantic! nice work! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 24, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A sweet, tasteful ride, and such a twist at the end. I'd thought that this was just one more Kagome's-lusting-after-Inuyasha-and-vice-versa, but no! |
Reviewed By: miroku*luv-taij-ia On: February 20, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! It's so sweet! *Switches into pro-writer/critic mode* The first part left you guessing and the way Kagome was depressed really showed. You really felt something while reading it. Also you have great grammar. It really ticks me off when people are too lazy to press spelling check. The second part really put you into the story and for the part when Kagome is riding the bike and slips into the dream, you really had me beliving that her dream was real. Being able to do that means you're a great writer.Please keep on writing. I'll look forward to seeing and reading your fics. ( *turns back into fanfic lover mode*) That was so kawaii!!! Plz write a sequel! Thankies! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ??? On: February 08, 2003 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
is there a zequel to this??????????? |
Reviewed By: Kellis On: January 23, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bitchin'! Need more. |
Reviewed By: Little B*tch On: January 19, 2003 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That's all I gotta say. |
Reviewed By: ***** On: January 18, 2003 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, what I story. Everyone should read all your fics and review. I likey. |
Reviewed By: Leslie On: January 14, 2003 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That was fantastic!! You should really make a sequal to this!!! |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww so sweet!
Make a sequel!
I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuved it!
*Go get Chibi Inuyasha*Runz around trip get up laughz runz sum more!
*Kairi-chan* |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 11:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that was so sweet! I loved it. And i hope you write more like itin the future.
~luv ya~ |
Reviewed By: kago'ma On: January 03, 2003 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated this fanfic a 10 because it has a little bit of scenes that are not suitable for children and plus this was a really great great fanfic!!! ireally do hope there is a part 3. it really was great
!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so sweet! and very well written... hmm i think it had more than a _little_ lime... ^_^ well, anyhu, i just thought i'd tell you inuyasha's katana is called the Tessaiga. there's this whole debate about whether it's Tetsu or Tess, and it's Tess because when the tsu character comes in a word like that it is silent and it doubles the consonant after that. It's a common mistake, just thought i'd clear that up so you can fix it in your fic.
Mara |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: January 03, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AMAZING it had so many unexpected twists and turns... Make a sequel! Finally Inuyasha got the little push that he needed to tell Kagome how he really felt before it was too late. |
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