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| "Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] | Reviewed By: Chanchan On: June 29, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that I am enjoying reading your reviews as much as reading your stories. I have been telling anyone who asks about the superb quality of your writing and the addictiveness. If I don't do anything else, I check for updates everyday.
I was glad to see Sch and Masato finally mated. They were beginning to piss me off to no end. It was well worth the wait. I had to turn up the fan after reading that chapter.
To anyone who has not read any of your other fics, one question...WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?
Keep up the outstanding work. I look forward to your next installment. Just try not to make it too long. Shadows is the only thing that will take me away from my Gackt obsession.^_^ | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 29, 2003 16:37 CDT
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The ending was a bit wierd, if not a bit off topic (whatever that happened to be). The whole secret-admirer thing has me a bit intrigued. All evidence pionts to Kikyo and that handsom head of his, but you can always hope fore a twist, ne? | Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 02:51 CDT
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*clears throat* Neko-chan... I...have something very important to ask you... *blushing, gets down on one knee and pulls out a black velvet ring box* Will you....marry me? *opens box to reveal white gold ring with a sparkly diamond that has a pattern of rubies and emeralds to each side*
I'm sorry... I just had to ask... And, since I really won't be able to provide the services of a husband/wife (since I'm a very straight woman...sigh), I will give you, my esteemed bride, full access to my bishounen harem. Yes, I love you THAT much. *usually very possessive of her bishounen* | Reviewed By: Yin On: June 28, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. I can't believe that i've read all you fics in the shadows! it's time to come to the light and make my mark!! lovely lovely! honestly lady I'd give 4 hands and 20 feet to have your muse ( *scratches head* though I don't have those yet) oh the pain of awaiting angst! yep I'm on my way to heart attack number 789! Your fault! Bad neko! keep up the good work and i promise to stop nagging you, hmm, well not really! but you already knew that right? lol. ^_^ | Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! :)
Since I haven't reviewed the second part of Mates, I'm going to do it here. :)
Actually, I've been trying to recover from reading (and re*insert X times*reading) the part where Masato and Schu was mated and I don't think I can come up with anything constructive to say except that I really, really, really enjoyed it, as usual! :)
First, that scene with the two of them was sooooooooo hot!!! I was left drooling all over the desk when it was finished and the only thing I really can complain about was that it didn't have to end there, you know... ;) I wouldn't have minded the rest of the chapter being about them... *starts drooling again*
As someone on the list already said - nice to read about Omi and Nagi, but it would have been a little too much to "watch" their devirginization (or how the hell the word is spelled... *sigh*) and it was right to stop there. They're cute, like my brother and his gf are cute, but that doesn't mean that I want to know what they're up to... *shudders*
Ahem.
Back on track again!
Nice to see that Yohji finally got his brain into gear with Schu and Cass! But I can't help to feel sorry for him when he's going to watch Aya being bled - that's going to be really hard for him, me thinks... He's so protective (overprotective, sometimes...) and I can see him freaking out when he sees Aya being hurt, even if he knows that it has to happen.
I know that it's prolly too early to beg you for another chapter since you're going to be busy, but a one shot in the Shadows Universe sounds really nice!! Yohji & Aya? Or please, please, please... Schu and Masato? *grin*
And as usual... Thank you for such a wonderful chapter!
~Mini | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 28, 2003 04:37 CDT
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What's up with the bitch-slapping that are occuring more frequently in recent chapters? I'm lovin' it all, though, nothing like a good slap to get the heads rolling in the morning!
Good for Cass and Botan, they deserve a bit of happiness, especially now that there is an approaching war in the near future.
You know what? I'm confusin' my damn self! I don't know if this or that happened in a chapter or the one before it, so if my reviews are a bit unorganized it's because of my great Bound Powers of Confusion! (You'd think that I should be able to confuse someone other than myself, but nnnoooooo!)
Oh, and in my previous review, I meant to say *swear* not "sweat" | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 28, 2003 03:31 CDT
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I have to smile at this one, even Cass and Botan are hooking up. It's sad really, but maybe Schuldie will find someone GOOD for a change and settle down just like Yohji.
Out in that GARDEN?! Of all the-I can't believe-I really need to take some poiters from Yohji, cuz if he could coerce a snapping dragon like Aya into a romp under a tree, then maybe I'm doing something wrong here...
How do you do it? I'm serious, I can't believe how addictive the sex scenes are between Yohji and Aya. I sweat, I almost feel like whipping out a cigarette everytime they're done doing the deed. You keep this up, and I'll end up being a chain smoker... | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 28, 2003 01:31 CDT
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Woohoo! There was a mention, by Cass of course, that Schuldie had a mate out there somewhere.Me am so happy!
This chapter to me for a loop, it sure did! | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 27, 2003 22:32 CDT
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Woo, Aya got game! ^_^ Yohji/Aya lovin in always good.
When Yohji called Aya a monster I was shocked. When Aya fell to his knees in grief, I swear that I could actually feel my heart clench at that exact moment. I felt what he felt at that moment. It's incredible, how you can make the simple act of kissing so sensual that you could feel the heat rise within your chest before anyone even took off a piece of clothing, simply wonderful.
The whole lobster thing was hilarious, and a good ice-breaker from all that hot lovin' and intense feelings that were going on all throughout the chapter.
Oh, schuldie!
How you came and you stole my fresh baking
Now you're creepin' away,
Oh, Schuldie
I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself! ^_^;; It just popped into my head at that precise moment. I want schuldie lovin'! I want Schulide lovin'! Barry Manilow rocks (but only on Tuesdays)! | Reviewed By: Kal Kally On: June 27, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Insanely long. But then, I'm so so happy that it's insanely long!!! I read it all night without sleeping, I just can't stop reading it. Super cool, with all that plots and ideas about bounds and all. Please don't stop here, update soon please.
It's quite a while since I read an AU fic this good. Off to find more of your fics now. Thanks so very much for writing such a wonderful fic and sharing it with us. | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 27, 2003 21:29 CDT
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This was a real shocker, this chapter. What would Yohji do if he found out Aya was a bound?
I'm staring to feel bad for Schuldie-chan... | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 27, 2003 13:11 CDT
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I thought I already did a review, but I guess I was just sleep-writing.
I like this side of Aya, and though I completely adore Nagi, I was less than pissed when Aya put his foot down and went into Yohji's room. I was rootin' for Yotan! WWWOOOOOO!!
I like that little "nice-streak" that Jei has (or has developed?).
Still no love in sight for Schuldie-chan T_T | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 26, 2003 22:39 CDT
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I LOOOOOVVVVVE angst and jealousy driven rage! Strangely, it's fits Yotan.
I've been feeling kinda sorry for Schuldie because he has no one to call his own, now that it's apparent that Jei's as straight as an arrow. Maybe he'll become that Koneko's resident playboy from now on...then again, Crawford seems adamant about letting his offspring have any fun.
s | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 26, 2003 04:52 CDT
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Oh, and before I forget AGAIN, isn't succubae or succubus the female form of those lovely dementers. Shouldn't Youji be called an Incubae-bound because (of course, unless there's something I should know) he's male, and the male form of these demons are called Incubus(es)
Oh great, now that I've remembered that, I'm gonna have nightmares about gorgeous He-demons attacking and ravaging me...on second thought...-No, it's a bad thing, it's a bad thing, it's a bad thing....I just have to keep telling that to myself... | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 26, 2003 02:07 CDT
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Woops! I meant to say Youji, not Wouki...I don't even know what the hell that is! | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] |
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