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Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 20:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This sounds like an interesting story and goodplot
your writing is very discriptive and to the point
but PLEASE! dont make it a Anzu/Yami there are way to many of them even if the original story line has them hook up. Keep writing ^_~ |
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