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Reviewed By: blackdeath On: January 18, 2003 09:22 CST
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hi i love your fanfic not meant me i just was woundering where you heard the song forsaken please e-mail me at salamander666@shaw.ca |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW THE HELL CAN YOU END THE STORY WITH A MISCARRIAGE? And how could Bulma have a miscarriage if she hadn't even been pregnant for one whole day yet? I don't think there would usually be enough time for anything to go wrong. Anyway, great story. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 14:58 CST
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Oh no, Bulma was pregnant? And miscarried? Damn, things better start looking up in the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great this is one of te best keep it up |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: January 13, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Great Fic! I want more chappies! ^_-*
I think your on a roll here! Please Update soon I
Wonder if Vegeta will ever come back???
Who know's? Well you do! LoL anyway keep up the good work! C-Ya |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: January 10, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r doing great ! Keep it up Cant wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: oh so spookified person On: January 10, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm. methinks me have read this before. did you have it posted on fanfiction.net? or maybe i just read something similar. |
Reviewed By: Kameya/Danessa On: January 10, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW good job!
I love that soundtrack! and the Movie Lestat is hot! heh
Keep it up i wanna read more! |
Reviewed By: silverx On: January 10, 2003 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is my favorite soundtrack. The so fits the songs too. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fic and I agree don't worry about the reviews as long they are reading it. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 07:47 CST
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Hey, you've got an interesting story here. I like that she helped him regrow his tail. Ah, the possibilities. :) Anyway, don't let the number of reviews get you down. Hell, I resorted to shamelessly begging for reviews on my own story. Keep up the good work and update soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANOTHER GOOD EP |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 09:58 CST
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This is very nice for a first time fic. I like the way you managed to regenerate Vegeta's tail, and there is very real tension between Bulma and himself, which is hard to achieve.
I would say the only thing you need to work on is you past and present tences. They swaped about a fair bit in places, stopping the flow of the story.
Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed it! I look forward to reading more. Ember. |
Reviewed By: blackdeath On: January 18, 2003 09:22 CST
Comment/Review:
hi i love your fanfic not for me i just was woundering where you heard the song forsaken please e-mail me at salamander666@shaw.ca |
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