| "The Price of Freedom" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 19:45 EST
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aw she kissed him! damn i have to leave for somewhere but when i get back =D sry im a big loser lol
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 19:40 EST
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cant stop reading...must go to chapter 5
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 19:33 EST
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inu is such a jerk =P
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 19:27 EST
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lmao crazy condoms...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 19:22 EST
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ur gonna hear a lot from me since i plan on reviewing every chapter...im so curious..g2g2 chap 3 now
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 15:23 EST
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just read the first chapter and im intrigued =D
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: December 08, 2003 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gapes* i don't know what to say!!! ::gets all choked up:: erp. (okay, lets make this as simple as possible...) it was... it was... FANTASTIC! XD you're awesome! all your stories are always different, and they're ALWAYS funny, serious, tear-jerkers all at the same time! (and i happened to be listening to "You'll be in my heart" by Phil Collins while i was reading this, and since --in my opinion-- it goes rather well with this fic, that just made me cry all the more. ^ ^; heh heh, i can be such an emotional freak...) but you're just plain amazing ^-^ golly geeze... you're so creative! HEY! speaking of creative, do you draw? i bet you could write an AWESOME manga if you put your mind to it! you could think up AWESOME characters, and write an AWESOME plot, and it would ROCK! XDDD and- wait, WHY the heck don't more people review on this fic!? O.O it deserves a LOT more reviews! hmm... ::shrug:: well, i loved it. ^-^ i love ALL your fics!!! i just have one more to read, then i'll have read all of them!!! ha ha ha! ^-^ and- O.O CRAP! >.< i'm rambling again... ::snaps fingers:: darnet! anyway, thanks again! ja ne! ~Kate ~Kate
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely lovely. It's just fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Queen Mongoose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing story! I loved it, basically, and one thing...when Naraku said to Inuyasha, "I am your father," I distinctly remembered a certain Star Wars movie...Lol, anyways, I'm just praising your work basically, hope you enjoy it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off let me say that this was one of the most original InuYasha fan fics that I have ever read! (Did Dark Angel inspire you to write this?) This story was brillant, intense, and heart pounding. However I read your story Soul Exchange before this one, and while this story is good it pales in comparision to your late works. (Guess you got more confident as you went along, *smiling brightly*)
I can tell that you took great care and thought into writing the parts about the government and infiltration scenes, as well as the why InuYasha's psycie. The story was well written and maintained the type of work and quality that I have come to expect from your work. There were some spelling errors that made me re-read some sentences, more than twice. Please, if you have spare time, fix them. Because it makes some parts confusing or changes the meaning of the sentence entirely. (just because I took the time to figure it out doesn't mean someone else will )
I love your work and I will continue to read the rest of the stories you have already submitted. But will you be working on something else soon? After reading Soul Exchange I am not content with just one taste of your work. I want more!! Besides you are one of my top three fav fan fic writers.
Keep writing. See ya next review! (Please excuse any spelling errors above)
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Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyaaaaaaaah !!
that was just wonderful !!
you know what ?? I really love what you do !
I've read everything you've published yet .. and I've got just one thing to say : go on !
you're really gifted, your stories are magicaly wonderful !
You're a fast writer ? I know how it is, i'm too ^^ (but only in french... (currently trying to learn english Y.Y)
love what you do.
go on ^^
^^-_-^^
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: Inuheart On: July 16, 2003 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great fanfic and I totally enjoyed it!!! I love all of your stories cuz they have so much imgination and a great plot to go along with it all. I loved the part where Naraku said I'm your father.(^_^) Very Luke and Star Wars.
Sob~sob~ I love happy endings!! You are the best!! start a new story soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: hishiro On: July 03, 2003 07:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing.....absolutely amazing...I've read all of your fics and this one is just as good....*applause*.....go ahead Take a bow!!!!
w00t!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears fall* This is one of my FAV Inuyasha Au's EVER!!!!!!!!! *grins madly* What a GREAT idea for a story... you should DEFinatley write more! ^_~
*wishes she had more time to chat, but can't* |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 16:19 EST
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THIS FIC IS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! I love the idea and everything! It is so great!! *sniff* I luuuv happy endings!!!!!!!!!
Allie~ |
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