| "Digimon 02: The Road Not Taken" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: ????? On: October 14, 2011 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the he'll was that it???? The most intense bit and then it just cuts off like that 0.0? |
Reviewed By: 731nad On: April 07, 2011 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I was completly absorbed by your story I do hope you continue this as it is such a great piece of writing |
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit this story haunted me so much that I couldn't sleep at night. I'll keep hunting you down until you finish it. I don't even care if the ending sucks, I just have to know how this story ends.
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Title: You Moved Me
Reviewed By: Enang On: May 19, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you,i cried because of this damn awsome story, i like it. plz continue.
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Reviewed By: TK4life On: May 07, 2007 22:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please please finish it.
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Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 00:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, R80. Just read through the story again, and it is great! Please update! Keep up the good work!, TMR
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Title: Digimon on YouTube
Reviewed By: angelfox541 On: October 31, 2006 16:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story and hope you complete it. As for watching digion: http://www.youtube.com/profile_play_list?user=LiLAsN You Tube is amazing!
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Reviewed By: Katharine On: August 21, 2006 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this digimon story was the best one i have ever read in my entire life! i cant wait till you finish the story! i was crying at the part when nancy was with t.k telling him he should just let it all out after kari called him a crybaby. i was bawling. it felt so realistic. i also like how you chose tai to go against karis whishs. she deserves it. davis is such a jerk. i really like how you made the story like the series. i cant stand reading storys that have like nothing to do with the series. you did a really good job with this story. cant wait till the next chapters. my email is kaghamalian@hotmail.com. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Anderson On: July 15, 2006 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is deep, one of the most emotionally driven Digimon fictions I've read in awhile where the bonds have been severed like this. Personally, I think it'd best if TK didn't take Kari back, despite her pleas, and that he do his own thing with the group he's formed with the other DD's. You really got everyone's personality down-packed, from Davis' self-centered...ness, to Cody and Yolei being the voice of reason, to the older kids as backup. Keep it up. I've got my eye on this.
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Reviewed By: Lowery On: July 02, 2006 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh. I love you for doing this so much. =) I read in one of your authors notes earlier, that you wished they had the series on DVD? Well if you're still looking for it, I know where you can get it: http://www.digimonsterranch.com/mainpage.html All four seasons (should you want them). It's a good price too =) I'm anxiously awaiting the next couple chapters, so untill then,
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 03:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story i havent read a good Digimon story in a long time and yours is right up ther. Poor gato just got used and abused by kari but i hope she figures out her mistakes soon. Also what is goin happen with Vee-mon since he feels all bad bout what happen to pata???? well i guess i will just have to wait till next time...i hope u update soon!!! well later 4now!!
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Reviewed By: jp On: June 17, 2006 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories i've read. I am a big takari fan. But this is really good. Don't stop now, I want to see what happens. Make tk beat the hell out of Davis. Also make him a badass but make him still a good guy but not the type of person to be messed with. Keep it up pleasssssse. Don't you dare stope now
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Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You already know what I'm going to say Rob.... Go TK!!
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Reviewed By: nuelle On: April 17, 2005 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic because it has twist and turns about digimon and the romance thing. I also like the part about davis-the-more obnoxius than needed
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Reviewed By: Shiro Kuro(Hikage but too lazy to sign in) On: November 26, 2003 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the overall plot line, but I find the way you write a bit...awkward, since you rarely use paragraphs and descriptive words, but It's still an overall good story, I don't like Daisuke alot, but generally I don't hate him since he has redeeming traits, guess he's like Ryouga, either you like him or not, or just don't care for him. And about the latest chapter, so you don't want to be Mimi's boyfriend like last time? Kinda self inserty and corny in "A New Path" but it was ok, and you could always create a new character, or crossover a character...I'm pretty much rambling now and most likely my opinions and Ideas ignored but I dont really care ^.^
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