| "The Battle of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 15, 2004 08:56 CDT
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Oh please help. I'm having some major trouble on the stupid reviews, like last time. And when it says that I have missing information and I don't, it has slash marks between words like don't, won't etc. they have slash marks on in between here= don/'t. Like that. Is there another reason? And is there anything I can do to fix it? Well if you have time please answer. And we're still waiting for your update for your stories. Please update as well. Your a great authoress and The Battle of Hearts has become a BIG hit. If you can't answer or update soon because of a problem or your off on vacation we understand. Your the best. Well talk to ya later, SSU.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 10, 2004 12:58 CDT
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Hey remember when I asked for help on when I review and it won't let me submit it, it says I have missing information and I have everything that is needed? Well is there another explaination when I review for a lot of stories and all of them were rejected? If you can help please review. Thanks soooooo much! And we're still here and waiting for updates for your stories not just for The Battle of Hearts but like Torn Destinies and Yugioh Cruise Line. Hope you're still there.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 07, 2004 16:37 CDT
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Sorry so long. I couldn't get on the net,(no it's not because of Yami)it's because of the dumb telephone line. Well I'm back and really how long now do you need until the next chapter will be up? I'm desperate here! I'm going to check at least once everyday to see if the next chapter is up. I just hope I'll have the time. Oh, I remember you said something about a sequel, well if your doing one after this fanfic, I'd say go for it!!!^_^ Well gotta go and catcha later SSU!!!
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Title: =(
Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 21:15 CDT
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WHEN ARE YOUR GOING TO UPDATE STORY?!!!!! I BORED OF WAITING AND I REALLY WANT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS SOOOOOO UPDATE FASTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 16, 2004 19:45 CDT
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Hey am I the only one reviewing this fanfic?! It's a really great fanfic and you all know you can review more than once! I'm really iching to read the rest of the fanfic. I'm actually reading this all over, because I love the fic. Come on and review already people!!!!!!! *glares at people who should review* Happy writing SSU! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 12, 2004 20:53 CDT
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Hey thanks for the answer Salior Star Universe. I would've reviewed hours earlier but someone held me back (No it's not Yami. If it was I think he would've been tied up in a chair right now.)(Just look in some of the reviews I wrote in Yugioh cruise lines and you'll know what I mean) I have one more question if you don't mind. When a authoress is done writing a fic what do they do then? I just hope they keep the story on. I really love the fanfic Torn Destinies. Please update on that fic. Hope you'll update soon, for The Battle of Hearts. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:29 CDT
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it's usually becuase the author has a glitch with their story. if you're reviewing to me just fine and to everyone else except that author then it's their issue. Their story might not be totally hooked up right. They also might have just put it up. Or they might have been trying to do something else with it. Just wait a while then try again later and see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 11, 2004 18:03 CDT
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Hey SSU! Sorry about this but I have a question. I just read this good fanfic, and I wanted to review. I'd be the first person to review, but when I try to submit, it wouldn't let me. It said that I had some missing information. But I had the name and the Review/comment which are required for reviewin'. If you can help me please reach me when you have time. thanks. :)
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Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 03, 2004 19:13 CDT
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Hey don't feel so down! I know you can get all of this done! It's the same with me. I have a project due soon, a test coming up, my science teacher is packing us up with so much to do! It's tough alright. But don't let that keep you down! You're one of my absolutly favorite authors! Keep up the great work Salior Star Universe! I'll keep my eyes out on updates! See yah!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 16:28 CDT
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well thanks for the review! it's very helpful to know that people are still liking and reading this story so that i know that i'm not just writing for my health. haha I'm going to try and update my profile every time i sign on now. That' way if i'm almost done with a chapter you guys won't have a stroke from waiting so long. I only have 2 1/2 weeks left of school but next week is were my teachers have decided to make due dates for essays, projects, etc. *sighs* so yea it'll be crazy next week but i've already planned the finale and i even have an idea for a sequel if u want it. Everyone else please R&R!
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Title: SOOOOOO Romantic!!!
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: April 28, 2004 18:59 CDT
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I absolutly love this fanfic! I love romance fanfic. To tell you the truth I always cry if I read fanfics like this. I'm keeping my faith on Amari and her friends come home safe and sound. I also have deep feelings for Yami and Yugi. A lot of the parts with Yami and Amari spending time together alone are sooooooooooooooooooo romantic! Hey I hope you'll get through the school year just fine. So when are you getting out of school this year? Just checking when you'll have plenty of time to relax and come up with the next chapter! Just pace yourself. I'm sure you'll be able to get through from all that studying. I'd love to be in one of the fanfics. If you're making another romance fanfic that includes Yu-Gi-Oh and the relationship is between Yami and whoever, OOOHHH PLEASE make that be Yami and me!?! I'd love my name to be Serenity(Serena for short) or Sakura. Love the fanfic!!! Update when you've got the chance!
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Reviewed By: litlleniegenie On: April 09, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finish it please?????its really good!!!!dont keep me hanging!!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 21:14 CDT
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next chapter is on it's way ^_^
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Reviewed By: Light Angel On: April 08, 2004 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaally like your fanfics and if you get a new story can I be in it?
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Reviewed By: Some girl On: April 08, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic so far. I think you should get some new chars.about two. I really think you should make a secqul. Can I be in one of your storys? well if so email me at Soartylner@yahoo.com
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