| "The Battle of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 13:38 CST
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That was a great chapter! Write a ssequel, who cares what Joey says. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 18:34 CST
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Hey great chapter! I luved the 14th chapter! Please write the next chapter soon! Oh and by the way I haven't gotten the e-mail yet. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: calupe ... too lazy to log in On: November 23, 2003 09:20 CST
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This was a GREAT chapter!!! Hmm sorry I haven't been reviewing recently but I have been reading! It's a little confusing for me since I don't know anything about Sailor Moon but that's okay! I can sort of figure it out :) I hope the new one's coming up soon!
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Title: Response
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 22:22 CST
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In repsonse to AAPO's review: I'm trying my best no to make this a Mary Sue thing. I'm trying to relate it alot to The orignal Sailor Moon amd Yugioh series, but it's very difficult. I also rememebr stating in the summary of this story that it only deals with my own cahracter that i happened to think of one day and the outer scouts. I don't consider the last review a flame, it's contructiove critisum, and I DO take it into concideration. Flames aren't welcome but some constructive critisum is ok. But don't get mad at me if i don't do what everyone suggests, this is my story that i made up on my own. I wasn't sure if I should have put this as a Crossover in between Sailor Moon and Yugioh because (as I've said before) it's only a piece of the sailor moon idea put into a Yugioh world. Do you catch my drift? That's why it is called a "own" character, because they are different form the orignal, therefore they can be stronger or weaker than the characters before them. I made her up, peroid. Thanks to AAPO for being so mature in your review. And I'll promise you one thing, that I'm trying my hardest not to make this a Mary Sue thing, that's wut I'm trying to avoid. I greatly thank you for your input and i will be considered. Be sure to email me if you have more input, I'd be glad to read it. And as for the rest of you... pain will come if u guys won't R&R! hehe j/k
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 22:01 CST
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Next Chapter is up! Hope you like it! It took me forever.
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Reviewed By: AAPO On: November 22, 2003 16:27 CST
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Sorry, this may seem like a flame. 1. This doesn't really seem to have anything to do with Sailor Moon except for your character. 2. There isn't a Sailor Scout of the Universe. There's Galaxia of the Galaxy, then Cosmos and Chaos. Those two are the most powerful and important scouts. 3. This seems awfully lot like a Mary Sue fic to me. Maybe it's not. I don't know. But it's about your character, who's the most powerful being out there. So that's it. It's not a flame, otherwise it would involve a lot of name calling and cussing, and I believe we are all more mature than that.
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Title: check my profile
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 18:33 CST
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Make sure to check my profile for the most recent updates!
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 19:12 CST
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I'm sorry if my last review seemed like a flame.
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Title: i swear!
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 20:01 CST
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I'm lovin' u guys reveiws but NO FLAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now constructive critisum is ok but if your going to flame me do it somewhere else an not on my reviews. I'm only HUMAN! Geez! P.S and this is for all my review sheets not just this one
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:45 CST
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When r u gonna make chp.14? U can't do this 2 me! I come here every day every hour to see if u updated. Can u pls update?
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Title: hola again
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 09:39 CST
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wut the title just said
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Title: hola
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 09:39 CST
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hola
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:43 CST
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SSU Chp 3 and 4 is up and at the end of chp.3 I made the Yu-Gi-Ohcast do a song for you.
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Title: chappie
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 16:58 CST
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once aagin the reviews are great and if course this is the only way i can check them at the moment and the next chappie's on it's way in a coulpe of days!
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Title: Thanx again
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 23:15 CST
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Hey SSU chapter 2 is up! I call it: The walkin, talkin, flyin stuffed animal. You're my favorite writer!
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