| "The fall of Sailormoon and the rise of Sailor Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: takauki05 On: July 27, 2003 22:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE GIVE USAGI HER MEMORIES BACK IT WOULD BECOME MUCH MORE INTERESTING THATS JUST A REQUST OTHER THAN THAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
Reviewed By: Holly Go-lightly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good I never thought of an Art/usa fic before, but I like it! |
Reviewed By: water On: June 22, 2003 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
God this story is good please wright more I loved it espically the whole new scout vs old scout and serena and artimes pairing so please wright more. |
Reviewed By: Tenshi_Chan On: April 05, 2003 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to put more puntuation, and make add more details. Not just like serena said this, then darien said this, you should make it with how they said it, like with a blush, glare, you know. Also, I think it Odango not Orandgo |
Reviewed By: sun*moon On: February 08, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing that i would recommend would be to maybe show a lil more about the characters. We all know about usagi, but the others...there isnt really any backround about them, and you dont really know what they look like or how their personalities are unlike the traitor senshi. So i would recommend expressing their characters more.Othen than that, great job. Very imaginitive. And enjoyable, love the artemis and usagi thing! |
Reviewed By: hehe On: February 08, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is up with beryll? And what about when the bad dudes called venus...serenity? Isn't there only one serenity? Shouldnt venus be called something else? And are they only half sister? I think usagi should get her memories back, so she can remember her family, and get back at the traitor senshi. Great work, keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: February 09, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It's excellent! More! Write more! |
Reviewed By: christina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you are a very good writer I seem to have read most of your work and i check everyday to see if you have updated please write more soon thank you. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Saturn On: February 05, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should right more. Never read one where Sailor moon would disappear. |
Reviewed By: Yume On: February 02, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
So far i like. I do have one little request though...DO NOT make her TRUE LOVE MOMO-BAKA! |
Reviewed By: Comet Moon On: January 21, 2003 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it. Hope she regains her memories as well. There are some of her mother in them as well after all. Keep up good/fantastic work. |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 14, 2003 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
more more more!!!!
who is usagi's true love? mamoru? I hope not >_<
I don't like mamoru >_ |
Reviewed By: Kimiko S. On: January 09, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. It'd be better if you had more though... This is definatly a story that I'll keep checking up on. Keep writing okay? It's really good and it kept my attention all the way through. Too bad there wasn't more, that way I could give you something to work off of. Just keep writing 'cause its coming along great. I'll be waiting for that next update. Till then, ciao. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 14, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's Beryl's name doing in there? She said the Inners betrayed their princess, and to bring the REAL Inners back. What did she mean by that? No way the Outers will desert Usagi! Since she's the real princess! Everyone except for the baka inners and baka Mamrou knows that! Jeez! *rolls eyes* |
Reviewed By: laurain On: February 07, 2003 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is good. Keep up the good work. |
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