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Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
So, Yugi tried to kill himself? How sad, he seems to have so many problems in his life. The flashback scene was interesting. I hope you do more. Please post the next chapter soon!? |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say say is that your fic really moved me. I have never seen a fic like this, where Yugi wasn't actually a little angel. I loved it! I one suggestion to make though, can you please not make Yugi kill Joey? Can you let Joey tell him that he didn't think as Tea did? I would hate for Joey to get killed, he's one of the main characters in the show. Please? |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* Yugis not going 2 kill Joey. Is he
Yugi: but I dont want 2. Hes my friend
*shugs* Keep writing |
Reviewed By: lastdj7701 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I hate to be pushy, but you have to write more. You have no choice. I'm hooked now! It's an addiction! Your fics are SO awsome... keep it up!! |
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