| "Falling in Love the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:56 EST
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Holy guacamole!! That's not your typical sex dream! ha ha. Poor Bulma. That's alot to be thrown at someone within such a short amount of time. But I love it!
Go Vegeta!!! *jumps up and cheers* It's about damn time he came to his senses! |
Reviewed By: bise b On: March 09, 2003 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! PLEASE NEW CHAPTER SOON! PLEASE.. I LOVE THIS FIC! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2003 00:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit Vegeta made alot of sense. As much as Jet loves Bulma, the bottom line is that she's not in love with him. Vegeta comforted her the best way he knew how but I think it'll take more to convince her that marrying Jet would be a big mistake. My favorite line? I know what passion looks like in your eyes Bulma, because I saw it when you were with me". Wow! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:32 EST
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Can you pwease update soon *gives puppydog eyes*, pwease? |
Reviewed By: BogusRed On: March 03, 2003 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 17 was a great chapter. I got teary eyed when Vegeta said not to waist any more time on him and then Bulma fell into his arms. I can't wait for the next chapter ^.^ Write more chapters like 17 |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 23:01 EST
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wow...... epppppp post more soon |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: February 24, 2003 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very insightful, very enjoyable fic! I'm lovin'it!
(Excellent grammar and spelling to boot!) You certainly know how to set a mood. The emotions are palpable! Write On! |
Reviewed By: Onna On: February 24, 2003 10:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely the best chapter so far.
I.Loved.It. ^^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 00:09 EST
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Wow, I never thought Vegeta could be so insightful! very nice. can't wait to see what's next! |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 23, 2003 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeah! You updated! I really liked this chapter. I can't wait for more!!!! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 23, 2003 19:33 EST
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If Bulma is really as smart as she always proclaims to be, then Vegeta's words should sink in and make her realise that all Jet has been doing is trying to win a woman with just mere cliques.
Bulma and Vegeta definitely had something very real between them before Bulma's hurtful words and demands for him to never be a part of Trunks' life, was what made Vegeta sever the tie they had, (which was entirely her fault because she never let him have a chance to tell his side of the event and by the time she heard it from Future Trunks is was too late), and she again blames him for feeling lonely.
If Bulma looks back on what she and Vegeta shared before the end of the Cell Games, she'll realise what they shared was very real and meaningful, and the foundation of it wasn't done by cliques, but rather by real feelings.
If Bulma thinks long enough, she'll realise that what Trunks said to her before she left, and what Vegeta said once she got home were both entirely true. If she didn't have any feelings for Vegeta, she would never have allowed him to use her body like that and let him fly off into space like he had originally requested, and if she didn't have feelings for Vegeta, Trunks would never have been born. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this soo far. I could see some of the conversations happening. It's kinda funny. Keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD ! this was so so ok I havent got the words u make me cry what is it with u people U made me cry all the time!!! *except the lemons they make me smile* AHEM well um yeah ! and and I cant wait for the next installment UPDATESOONN!
By the way before I forget when is the next lemon going to be? *smirks*
Later! :p |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 21, 2003 01:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it!! I hope Bulma says "yes" just to see what Veggie-kins will do. Jet sounds like a great guy (probably a homocidal maniac behind closed doors ^_^), and Bulma should be loved and pampered, but it's Veggie she should be with. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 23:26 EST
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EPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP cliff hangers are evil. oye oye poor veggie i'd be worried if i didn't know for a fact that they get togather in the end. please cont. soon |
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