| "Winning Duo" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: 'lil debbie On: February 28, 2003 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I flipped on the computer just to do a quick e-mail check before I left for work. . . then I decided to take a quick peek over here. Unfortunatly, when I saw you had layed down another chapter, my cry of joy woke up the boys. bummer! But what a great way to start a work day!! I'm really enjoying this, I didn't think I would when I say Wu's name in the mix. But the way you're putting it together, it works~good job!! |
Reviewed By: 'lil debbie On: February 28, 2003 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I flipped on the computer just to do a quick e-mail check before I left for work. . . then I decided to take a quick peek over here. Unfortunatly, when I saw you had layed down another chapter, my cry of joy woke up the boys. bummer! But what a great way to start a work day!! I'm really enjoying this, I didn't think I would when I say Wu's name in the mix. But the way you're putting it together, it works~good job!! |
Reviewed By: Kei On: February 27, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I find this interesting and amusing, the only thing I don't like is that when it comes to Heero and Wufei it gets very repetative. I mean you make them think and act exactly the same, so it's basically like re-reading the previous paragraph only with the names changed. I think it would have been a lot better if you had varied their personalities or actions a bit... but I'm still gonna read it. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 26, 2003 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'll get full ratings at the end of the story I promise! I kinda hope Duo does get sick so Heero and Wufei get to play doctor! On the other hand that would leave him very weak and he might not be up to the explanation of his past! What did Duo do that he thinks is so horrible? Please update soon I wanna find out!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: SS. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still reading, and still loving it! And still hounding you for more parts to this and to Life With Heero like the unrelenting onna I am. More please! I love the way Duo shows his smarts and skills in part 15. And it shows growth that Heero and Wufei are trying to understand him now as a person, regardless of their own needs and competitive natures. They're focused on fixing past wrongs and learning to understand Duo. Yay! (^_^) SS. |
Reviewed By: Empress On: February 24, 2003 07:45 CST
Comment/Review:
You must update soon. I comand it! For I am the Empress of Existence and have deemed it so! So please hurry! ^.~ ! I want to see how Hee-chan and Wu-baby react when Duo actualy tells them about his past! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 23, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sticking with this story and I won't stop until you finish the thing! Please let that be sometime soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. I loved the idea of that guy in charge of security. He was so stupid that I couldn't help laughing so hard while I was reading this. I can't believe he was so ignorant and stupid. God
he should have been on the janatorial commitee rather than Security. I mean how dumb can you get? He is such an idiot. But hey all stories need some jackass to make fun of right? So sad for him!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 21, 2003 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! You can't have Wufei and Heero hate him for his past. That would be too cruel! I love the story and I hope you update again soon it is getting to be fantastic! How mny more chapters do you think there will be? I hope not too many cause I want the happy ending to come soon! But hey not many to me is like around 20 chapters! JA NE!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Lita On: February 20, 2003 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good! I can't wait till they get closer. continue soon plez. |
Reviewed By: SS. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just finished part 18, if you can't tell from the cry above. Calic0, you're so meeean! Every time I finish a part I'm left sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for more ...
Hopefully Heero will return the favor, showing Wufei how to understand. Their backgrounds really work against them sometimes, ne? More soon please!! |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been so good! I am so impatient though and can't wait for them to get closer...all three of them! Please hurry and continue! Awesome story! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 18, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IT IS SO SWEET!! Heero and Wufei are begining to like each other! Can they kiss? That would be so Kawai! You have to do that. But the problem of Duo's first kiss, what are you going to do about that? For the first time Duo makes love to them, who gets to go first? I hope that you come up with more ingenious ways to solve these problems. I can't wait until you updat again soon!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 07:55 CST
Comment/Review:
ah! thats the best part yet. the development between heero and wufei is stunning. I hope they end up as a thressome, I do i do i do...get the point>? lol |
Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 10:43 CST
Comment/Review:
All the suspense and competition. I love it. If possible please mail me when updated.
Arigato, James freakyone23@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bouncebounce* Write more! Argh! You can't just leave it thereeee! Write more soon, pleeeease? *Giggles* Wufei and Heero are real idiots at times... at least they're getting some sense beaten into them! Please write more soon? |
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