| "Dark Majik" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: maggie On: August 20, 2003 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love your story , please just kepp vegeta away from Bulma beacause i want the baby born and goku by her side just don't let him kill her or her baby. |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 31, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more |
Reviewed By: Alivira On: July 30, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fics I've ever read!
Please, please continue! =^_^= |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 06, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had been trying to find this fic again for quite sometime but somehow I always managed to miss it. Now that I've found it again...
Please continue, this is an absolutely excellent fic and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Miyu On: July 04, 2003 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I just read chapter 2 and I'm like SO scared !!! should I continue? I don't get scared easy, I love my scary movies, or my anything disturbing, I think its the only thing I buy.. Queen of the damned.. or whatever..
but this is like AHHHH!!! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: June 23, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, lord! This had me on the edge of my seat! Hot damm, this fic would make a freakin' great movie! God, 17's reaction- so funny! That was too Kool! Oh, I can't WAIT to find out what happens. *Is Bulma alive?* |
Reviewed By: Mai On: June 21, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a cliff hanger! Please update soon. This is a really good story. Never could I ever think of Goku as Satan, nor Vageta as being an actual good guy. You are a very good writer. Hurry and finish! |
Reviewed By: Chibi_Bubz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
o o;; You did a really good job at capturing all of the characters in this fic! ^^ And I love the way you turned around the Antichrist story and stoof.. >>;; Gooood job! *Gives a thumbs up* More chappies please! XD Arigatou!
And once again, GOOD FREAKIN' JOB! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: April 14, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like just about everybody else, I love the fact that you chose Goku to be the devil, other than that all I have to say is
more. now. |
Reviewed By: yaoipimp On: April 12, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I usually avoid het like the plague, but the idea of Goku as the devil was too good to pass up! And I have a strange curiosity of Bulma/Goku fics!
Where to start, well, I LOVE Goku as The devil, but I would. And with vegeta as the angel, it makes a biiig change from the norm! In a way it's easy to sympathise with Goku more than Vegeta thus far (Goku in this reminds me a lot of Bartleby from Dogma).
Vegeta and his sawn off shotgun, that would be funny as hell to watch! I can see it now @_@
And Vegeta and Yamcha in the car near the start, I read that about three times because it kept cracking me up!
Not to mention the lemon scenes, the whole demon thing made them work in a way lemons can rarely do! I salute you!
Unique/original/never seen it before! A Biiig thing when it comes to DBZ fiction!
And now, you must write MORE! MOOORE!! *cracks whip* |
Reviewed By: Zab Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o.... You must write more and soon, or I shall be forced to whack you with a large dead fish. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read this fic when it was posted on Fanfiction.net, I liked it then, and I like it now. ^_^
I noticed that you have changed a few things, and added a few others. I like what you've done.
One more thing, I love the originality of this fic! That is one thing that the DBZ genre has been in desperate need of recently, originality! Bravo, to you for your originality. ^_^
Now for the constructive critique, I did notice a few errors, spelling and grammar, to be specific. I found myself a couple times having to re-read a sentence to understand the meaning. But, that was, like I said, only a couple of times. So, it wasn't that distracting. Critique over, you can stop hating me now. lol ~_^
So, all in all, I have to say that this fic is a refreshing burst of fresh air, amongst the many stagnant fics floating around lately. With that said, I guess I'll leave with the old and trusty cliche'... Hurry with the next chapter, darnit! ~_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: Sel On: March 10, 2003 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoying it so far. Love the idea about Goku being the devil. Update soon. See ya |
Reviewed By: Laini On: March 02, 2003 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very awesome story so far..keep up w/ the good writing...update ASAP plz...*is very much intrigued right now* |
Reviewed By: Pandora666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so what the hell is vegeta. i'm really wondering her man. mi piace tu fan fiction. tu srivi malto pronto tempo. |
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