| "My Night With You" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: Nice Work!
Reviewed By: sonicscrndude On: February 19, 2005 01:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is obviously well written and well thought out, the story is exeptional and overall i think that you have a talent for writng the deeper, more complex storys. who should be with who is a matter of opinion and can only be settled when the people who own the characters set the story in one unchangeable direction.(you know what I mean) 9 out of 10 Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: StormTheHedgechidna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 04:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luve dis story.I read it on ff.net once. ya'no i HATE sally acorn! Sonamy is just so right!
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Reviewed By: Amygirl On: September 28, 2004 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best SonAmy lemon ever! You are a very talented writer and I'm still waiting on the sequel. ^^ *pokes gsdfgh* Have you read the comics lately? o.o Sally slapped Sonic and broked up with him in issue 134 cause Sonic wants his freedom and to be a hero then to rule by Sallys side, so they not together, as I heard. ^.^; Anyway, hope you continue the sequel to this masterpiece! ^^
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Reviewed By: gsdfgh On: July 09, 2004 19:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Your writing is wnoderful, so detailed, but I must say this: Sonic and Amy are not in love. They never were. Sally would never breka up with Sonic, and he would never do the same. SALLY AND SONIC FOREVER Y'ALL!
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Reviewed By: Shade Prower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutly great. I like the story, the way you write the story, the surprises, the romance, everything. You are one of the best writers of all time. I would love it if there was a movie of it. I'd buy it and watch it over and over and over until my TV blew up. Please continue with the story. Well, whenvever the next chapter is to your liking anyways, don't want to rush you, it might make you rush the story. Great story and can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Pink-Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 11:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it is , was and will ever be my favourite Story!!!plz continue this Story or the sequel they are both great.... I beg you to write more Sonic and Amy storys because you are the best SonAmy-story-writer i've ever seen.. ^_^ ^.^
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Reviewed By: ATP On: July 13, 2003 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you made this lemon more than mindless smut! In fac, this sounds like it might be able to really happen! A lot of fic writers can learn something from this! I only saw a few punctuation errors, which really didn't take away from the expereince. Keep it up, AND FINISH YOU'RE SEQUAL!!! |
Reviewed By: Reality On: July 06, 2003 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is perhaps the best romance story I have ever read. It is a great story that capitalizes on true love and emotion rather than smut. The sex scene at the end is made even better by the storyline that leads up to it. Whether you are a fan of Sonic the Hedgehog, a lover of romantic fiction, or a disgusting pervert; this is a must read!!! |
Reviewed By: The_Cheat On: July 04, 2003 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...are...the greatest... human being... I have ever....read literature by!!! You showed that bitch, Sally, A lot! You rule man! Words cannot express how much I loved your story! Its probobly because I feel my mom is amy, and my step mom is sally, and my dad...well i used to call him satan but now i call him a loser...(what a drop!) that i like this story more than all the reast of the sonic dump sally and get amy stories i read. Anyways, I made my own oe time and... It wasnt ad good as yours...it was only a sidestory on my comedy advenur action story... Sally and amy had a street fight and whoever won got to keep sonic (and scince sally was royalty she made a contract without telling sonic)...Now im just going on and on... I cant wait until My life with you is done.
So if you can, E mail me on when next part comes...yellowmew@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Kimmie On: March 23, 2003 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! You really have to right a fanfic about Rouge and Knuckles...without the chains and stuff, that would be great! |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat On: March 05, 2003 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not sure what the hell you did but it was something right |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat On: March 05, 2003 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not sure what the hell you did but it was something right |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was good. i like it no i love it. if you just diddn't have knuckles the bastard.... it would be perfect. have (smirk) rouge gay or no no no BUNNIE GAY!!! that would be a riot! or ROUGE AND BUNNIE!!! (busting gut) i really diddn't enjoi the descriptions that much because it's not the slang we use in ohio. but i was hooked untill amy got pregnant(stupid) |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 01:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
move the decimal over a place to the right, cuz it only let me score a 10! But i'm just happy there was no yaoi! Good writing! |
Reviewed By: THE AWESOME ONE On: January 16, 2003 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read TONS of fanficts over time and I have to say that this is DEFENENTLY one of the most enjoyable. I just LOVED how there was a little of everything in this story: action, drama, romance, humor {might I add you NAILED sonic's attitude and personality}, and the coolest thing of all . . . PRINCESS SALLY AS THE VILLAIN. THAT ROCKS! I LOVE IT! I havn't read your sequel "My life with you" But you can bet that I will. Trully awesome, plain and simple. |
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