"Love your Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hen[TA]i_Nizm0 On: February 11, 2003 10:23 CST Comment/Review: 3 chaps is great and all, but updating would be much appreciated
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Reviewed By: Aisha_Max [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:25 CST Comment/Review: Uumm I hate to butt in but Diva didn't say it was impossible but only not as easy as you wrote it. (Yes I know I'm pathetic I read other ppls reviews) I mean I love this story and I don't think you should change anything but it is a bit far fetched the way she skips grades. It almost seems like she just transfered to another school not skiped a whole grade. It's one thing to take advanced classes but to skip a grade is different.
Oh, and I could very easily be wrong on this but I didn't know that sophomore APs counted for college. Who knew! And kudos to you and your APUSH class. That's a hard one. Well anyways I do love this story and I hope that you continue soon. |
Reviewed By: HenTAi_Nizmo On: February 04, 2003 08:07 CST Comment/Review: A lot of us really loved this fic, pls update soon k? Dont keep us hanging pls!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Icy Flame On: February 03, 2003 14:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really love your fic! Pwease update soon! This is so entertaining. The idea is really original for this series. I wonder what will happen next. hehe Hope Sakura gets better. This kicks ass! Loving it! Later yo, Icy |
Reviewed By: Nekocin On: February 03, 2003 08:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: YAY! You've updated! i like the style, that's why the 10. The whole flow thing works for me. Pretty ansgty.
A 10 for grammar, because I haven't noticed any mistakes. Maybe I was too caught up with Sakura's story.
A 10 for originality or creativity. It's pretty cool and unique. It's not really your every day CCS AU fic where Sakura gets beat up.
A 9 for enjoyment. It's not too bad. It's pretty exciting and pretty capturing. CUTE too when the S+S pairing comes above.
PLEASe keep writing! I want to know more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 16:26 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: OOHHH! Please update soon!!! I love your fic!!! Also, please try to make the next chapter realllly long ( I know that's kinda hard, but please try to).
~*SS4EVA*~ |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 19:32 CST Comment/Review: That was cute so far, and angsty. How could that guy hit Sakura? Anyways, I'd wanted to review about this story and I end up talking about your fic in that review of another CCS fic *_~ I hope the writer isn't mad.
Anyways, the fic is getting good. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: NightAngel On: January 24, 2003 04:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story is very good, and it's a diferent plot from the many I've read (and tehy are really many!).
I think you're a wonderful writer, please update soon, and when you do please tell me, writing to this email: nightangelportugalmail.pt
Thank you!
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Reviewed By: HenTAi_Nizm0 On: January 22, 2003 15:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ei! Nice story so far. one of the best i read i dare say. Keep it up!
PS: Thnx for keeping me up later than expected ^_^, well cyas! |
Reviewed By: Diva On: January 20, 2003 12:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: The stories pretty good but you're spelling Hiroshi wrong. It isn't spelled with an e and skipping grades isn't as easy as you make it out to be. Plus, if Sakura was hurt Tori wouldn't be so oblivious. I really do hope you continue with this fic though. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 11:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ok...this has to be one of the best fic i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!
please write more, more, MORE!!!!!!!
thank you ^_^
BYE;p
obssesivefangirl sgining off!!
PeAcE BaBy yeah!! ;}
i have so many PrObLeMs O.o O.O o.O |
Reviewed By: browny On: January 14, 2003 00:21 CST Comment/Review: great fic. keep writing and have a new chapter realyl soon |
Reviewed By: Dragon On: January 14, 2003 00:21 CST Comment/Review: wow! i lvoe this fic..please please keep on writing. and soon. i want to know what happens..and make the next chapter really really long ..please..thanx bye |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 23:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved your story so far. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Mug3n On: January 24, 2003 07:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOWEE!!
Well done dude/dudette, loved the first 2 chaps. keep on goin k? |
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