| "Arrange Marriages" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Underworld On: March 11, 2004 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well written. All you need to do now is continue. anyways nice job so far!
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 12, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
thats so kool makoto is like the koolest heheh plz write more!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: silv_moon On: December 04, 2003 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
write moreeeeee. there's only 2 chapters--too short!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: strange child of fire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dis be really good I hope you continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Fire Dolphin On: October 19, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please right another ch.it is really good. but can you change the people who usagi is with. I know the'res a lot of fanfic's with Heero and Usagi .But they make the best pairring. THey act like one another. PLLLease please please put those two togethere, And Minako and Duo can be thogethere. But please write more.
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Reviewed By: ruka tenou girl On: August 09, 2003 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv how you made Usagi and Dou a couple. There r to many Heror and Usagi couples. Quatera and Ami r the perfect couple. |
Reviewed By: girldancer On: July 01, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving it!!! Hurry with the next chapter |
Reviewed By: angela On: June 13, 2003 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found your story quite amusing, and the words you decided to choose were quite intellectual, i commend you on your great effort |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon! Please,please,please?^_~ |
Reviewed By: Sailor Wind On: May 28, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. It was just like that really happened. Your story really reminded me of some of my best friends stories/strange dreams she used to tell me. All I really have to say is that you better keep on writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Setsuna On: May 26, 2003 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Luv ur idea for da story so far...buh I DO hope the pairings DO change through out the story! hahaha Rei and Wufei are quite da interestin pair and they DO act as if they WERE married... I think u spelt "Hiiro" wrong...its actally "Heero"...two e's not i's...N E WAYZ...PLEASE CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: kitty On: April 25, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee, continue to write more!!!
I think I know which couple pairings will be in the end. The story is quite amusing... |
Reviewed By: girldancer001 On: January 19, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving it write more I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: adb On: January 15, 2003 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
what no more.... can't leve us like that. |
Reviewed By: Furie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea.....I do Hope those aren't the pairings for the story *shudder* I bet they fall in love with a different guy/girl their suppose to be with...LOL HOPEFULLY anyways *the only good couple in there is Amy/Q-man hehehe
Good job...update soon NE? |
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