| "Test of Love- Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: LQ On: February 03, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic and not bad for a first lemon (unless i read incorrectly). The only thing is, there are some grammatical errors and a few words that were repeated.
Keep it up and maybe get a BETA reader. ^_^ Couldn't hurt and I hope to see more of this fic.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: shadowfire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love that line, "What's stopping you" it is nicly done and don't be worried...lemons are hard to write...i write the kissing scenes and leave the rest up to imaganation...you are doin great[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: shadowfire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lolx....the inconnence and the idea...me like[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: shadowfire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do like it...just it is kinda hard to follow who is talking to who...otherwise i loved it...keep going and knock Kaiba out of the picture, Yami/ yugi forever[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Very goodies!! Hope to read more soon, neh?
Ja!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK}[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Elys On: January 14, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it, I found IT!!!!!!!! I can't belive I found this story again! I wint to my favorites and I,i c,c,c,ouldn't find it! **starts to sob** I looked and looked and i hit the refresh button so many times i thought i'd brack (did i spell that right i dont think i did?) the mouse!i love this story! it's so good i am magrly happy that i finly found it! PLEASE! YOU HAVE TO WRIGHT MORE SOON!!!!!!! I NERLY DIED THE LAST TIME YOU TOOK SO LONG TO UP DATE!!!! it was on fanfic.net that i lost your fic. sorry -_-[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: January 25, 2003 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's still a little choppy. you may want to pick one pov ahead of time to write in one cap yami one cap yugi one seto and so on. if you could do more in one sho that would be nice. but all in all i like it alot (i hope i'm not being mean in any way i have gotten a lot of nasty review's myslef and i know it sucks)
and reamber it only matters if you like it and are haveing fun!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
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