| "Tears of Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 22, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!!! *starts jumping up and down* Yaoi, incest, lemons, violence and death! what a great fic |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I agree, yay for sexy aggressive Ryou! |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: February 25, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was good you have to update soon. |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell On: February 24, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this before on Fanfiction.net.
Seeing a fanfic with Malik in it is quite
interesting. Someparts were weird but I can
get over that!
-Ri-chan |
Reviewed By: Starr On: February 22, 2003 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. Your writing style (not just with this story) is amazing and makes the story even more worth reading. I can't wait for the next chapter, hint hint ;-) |
Reviewed By: alildevilgurl^_~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
HEY!!!!! this fic is so good so far. an jus wanna tell u that it would be sssssssooooo funny an embarrassing if seto failed so miserabley. i mean it would be sooo funny if seto was on the verge of actualli taking ovr egypt but forgot one lil thing an failed so miserabley. okay so this lil review is kinda long but jus givin u a suggestion. |
Reviewed By: b.luster123 On: January 28, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell? u left out so many parts? are u really the real author of Yami's 18th Birthday? or r some thief? Where's the part of seto's rampage with his BEWDs and the death of Bakura? Crap. |
Reviewed By: Yugis_April [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 07:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it the first time I read it! Come on! Update soon.........please???? |
Reviewed By: Kali On: January 26, 2003 01:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooookay..... |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very nice! ah, yami is so kind! seto's mean, but i never liked him anywayz! me really likes this... hope theres more soon! |
Reviewed By: AngelStarFire On: February 09, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno if you look on fanfiction, but I think I reviewed there too. I think this story is really good. You did something that had to do with ancient times, Malik, his sis, and Yami. A lot of people do the 'current' time feature, and it was refreshing to see something that was set differently. I also came just so I could read the un-edited version of CH 4, but we won't go there. ^^; anyways, keep it up, and write more! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! finaly one with isis and malik instead of ryou or yugi! interesting... i like how this is going, poor malik ^^. more more! update soon! |
Reviewed By: RyouBakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is Very Good I Enjoyed Seeing My Favorite Characters InThis Story |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 09:11 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* This sounds a lot like bishijo shadow's 'Pharaoh's Gift' but it was good. |
Reviewed By: jeti On: January 20, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like! i'd say to publish it in ff.net (they have an easier layout), but some loser would probably take it out for NC-17-ness. ah well you can't win 'em all... maybe a censored version...
all in all, a good story! please continue updating... er, re-updating.
~jeti |
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