| "Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: purple rain On: January 26, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good it almost reminds me of a Jane Austin novel. Except this has cooler characters! |
Reviewed By: Dorothy Winner On: January 23, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyebrows are not scary! And I enjoyed Seduction. Though it should have been about me! |
Reviewed By: Chris C. On: January 21, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice conclusion to this. I've already started on your sequel. |
Reviewed By: Sammy On: January 20, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a winner! So nice I read it twice. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Julia On: January 19, 2003 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Fabulous ending. I enjoyed all of it. Good writing. |
Reviewed By: No Pen Name On: January 19, 2003 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Now that's a pretty nice moment between Relena and Heero. So sweet. |
Reviewed By: Relena Y. On: January 17, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If that is the ending, it was a cool story. I hope it's not though. Need a resolution and happy endings all around. |
Reviewed By: No Pen Name On: January 17, 2003 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Want more of this! It's your own fault for writing such a cool story. Are you really finished? Is it really The End? At least have pity and give an epilogue! |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: January 17, 2003 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Treize is killed by Wufei (again). What happens to Lady Une now? Can't help but like her evil self. Like her most of all. Everything is great about your story. |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: January 17, 2003 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a long, involved story, but excellant and worth it. The characters still retain the qualities that made us like this series in the first place. I hope Relena and Heero have their happy ending. |
Reviewed By: Kaoru Himura On: January 16, 2003 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so bored I decided to read some fics and chose this. Not half bad. The drama was prefectly well written. I'll look forward to chapter 13. |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: January 16, 2003 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
AU FICS ARE USUALLY THE ONE THING I STAY FAR AWAY FROM, BUT I WAS DIFINITELY IMPRESSED BY THIS. I DID BLINK WHEN WUFEI KILLED TREIZE, SINCE IT JUST REMINDED ME OF THE ANIME. TREIZE JUST CAN NEVER BEAT WUFEI! NEVER! |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: January 16, 2003 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I really got into this. And it's very romantic how Heero always comes to save the day and his girl. Keep them chapters coming. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 16, 2003 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unbelievably excellant story. I love all the intruigue, romance, and backstabbing. Heero and Relena are a perfect couple no matter the situation. |
Reviewed By: Miaka On: January 18, 2003 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mad drama in this! You have a good writing style and pretty creative ideas with some of the characters personalities and romantic entanglements. Though Quatre and Dorothy will always seem like the most odd and scariest couple of all. Must be her eyebrows that scare me. |
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