| "Kaiba Brothers" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkSetoKaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the ratings could go any higher id give you a 15 on everything. anyways. Lol i like the idea of otogi being a die for the costume thinggy. Anyways i gots a song for the party thing. Its one i wrote. its called 'What I feel for you'
If you want the words to it please e-mail me at SetoKaibasAngel@yahoo.com since i dont know your e-mail (sowwy wasnt paying attention > |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, this is interesting... as much as i hate anzu, she was definetly OOC, but o well. o, n i heard somewhere that noa is acctually seto's yami, but im not sure. this chp was good, i like the part where yugha is tied up... ne wayz, me hopes theres finally a lemon in the next chp! it seems that the ppl at MMO review more... meh |
Reviewed By: BakurasAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Blame my dad for puttin the password on the computer.
I'm back and I've updated and I hope I can catch up on your story.
Can't wait for more and no you did no piss me off. |
Reviewed By: Magician Girl og Chaos Night On: February 23, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIE, DIE, DIE, DIE, DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(staging Anzu and Yugha contsantly with sowrds and daggers)
Ahhhhh..... Much better. KK-san, I don't know where you come up with these ideas, but I absolutly love them! And please can we have some magor Anzu bashing? She is such a freak-assed pillow butt! Keep updating, my Goddess.(Goes off to Death Shadow Dragon's city to worship) |
Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 23, 2003 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for doing the banners KK-san. I'm really greatful.
Also, that city I was building is finished and now I'm working on a world dedicated to you! I'm not kidding on how much I love your writing KK-san. It's one of the best writings I've ever seen. I enjoy reading it, and it's a great piece of work. And did you have Anzu get into the picture under my idea? Because I wrote something in a reveiw about Anzu and Yugha teaming up. Anyway, keep updating! |
Reviewed By: Anime-fan Meepa On: February 23, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why must you leave it like that?! *hands over weapon* Sure, you can use it...but, *pulls out shotgun* this is for Yugha and all those other bastards that wanna mess with Seto, Noa, Seth, Yuugi, and all them...Yugha should rot in fucking hell!!! And to think, somewhere earlier, I was actually starting to think 'Hhhm, maybe she's not such a tight-ass bitch after all...' but then, she goes and does this. -_-; Stupid bitch....oh well, again, my point of this review was; THIS IS THE BEST YU-GI-OH ORIGINAL FANFIC I'VE EVER FRIKKIN' READ!!! I love it! Can't stop reading or anything! You also do such a great job with updating! This is by far an amazingly done fic ^^ |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here yugha, yugha. hehe nice cliff hangercan't wait for what next |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! more, more! i wiked dat chp(20). again, me thinks mokuba should be a cat, ryou an elf (mabey the mystical elf) or the change of heart card, n hirla could be... i dunno, a mouse? phwee. hope u get 100 reviews soon, this story needs another lemon. |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 10:23 CST
Comment/Review:
yah! ...i hate cliffies! damn you...scuba steve!
hurry up and get the next chappie cause i'm angry..... well not really but still get the next chap or i'll..... i dunno! but it'll be bad.... you have 79 reviews! |
Reviewed By: SETO KAIBA 15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still a wonder how you come up with it. But i still love it! -Isis
Ya! My sis is right you work is still one of the best! -Seto |
Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 21, 2003 15:53 CST
Comment/Review:
O.k., I think that Mokuba should pressure Seto into a halloween party. Ice-cream flavor should be mint oreo for those who get sugar high, and then expresso and vanilla for the others. I personnally like sausage on my pizza, but I don't mind cheese and pepperoni. Any way, I think you should have the kids, yugi, jou, and honda get sugar high. I also think that Anzu should help Yugha get to Seto, then have some Major Anzu bashing! Stupid Freak-assed bitches..* Kills Anzu and Yugha, then blesses city so that their spirts can't come in*. |
Reviewed By: DarkSetoKaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 13:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I think you should have Ryou as an Elf now that I think about it. A monk costume really wouldnt work for him. now as for mokuba, i say have him go as a magician and do it Harry Potter style (have him go as harry hehehe) and hirla? hehehe have her go as Hermione if you take my suggestion. now...hmm...as for the food i think thats enough but may i say hotdogs and hamburgers? (cant have a party without 'em!) and um..you have to have desert there of course so i say cheesecake and cookies and other junkfood and I suggest that the setting be halloween or just a party they wanted to have. music..hrm..a few linkin park songs would do..maybe some system of a down? okay okay too loud...umm...*thinks* Maybe some Avril Lavigne? like 'complicated' or 'sk8er boi' or 'my world' i dunno anyways. I think thats enough from me. I like the idea of kukki as a cookie But i think it'd be cool for her to go as like this gothic type girl hehehe (im sorda gothic myself so dun kill me!! *cowers in corner*) well i hope you like my suggestions enough ranting from me. keep up the good work!!
Ja!
~DarkSetoKaiba/DarkAngel~ |
Reviewed By: moonymonster On: February 21, 2003 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ratings, they don't go to eleven! Meh...oh well....very cool! I like this fic very much! ^^ Poor Moku-chan and Seto though...but hey, Seto killed the bastard so yea! *goes to read Seto's Pain*
Moony Rating: 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMIGOSH! YOU GOT AN ELEVEN!!!!!!! THATS GREAT!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
ok! make ryou a monk.. mokuba a magician(so), hirla a magician helper! hama can be a... bunny!
they can eat all kinds a food! like all the food on the list! and if there's any left overs i'll eat em!... it should be a halloween party! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 22:22 CST
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just as long as joey can be a dog. even i think he looks kawaii in a dog suit. |
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