| "Kaiba Brothers" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkSetoKaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 13:22 CST
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Well, I think you should have Ryou as an Elf now that I think about it. A monk costume really wouldnt work for him. now as for mokuba, i say have him go as a magician and do it Harry Potter style (have him go as harry hehehe) and hirla? hehehe have her go as Hermione if you take my suggestion. now...hmm...as for the food i think thats enough but may i say hotdogs and hamburgers? (cant have a party without 'em!) and um..you have to have desert there of course so i say cheesecake and cookies and other junkfood and I suggest that the setting be halloween or just a party they wanted to have. music..hrm..a few linkin park songs would do..maybe some system of a down? okay okay too loud...umm...*thinks* Maybe some Avril Lavigne? like 'complicated' or 'sk8er boi' or 'my world' i dunno anyways. I think thats enough from me. I like the idea of kukki as a cookie But i think it'd be cool for her to go as like this gothic type girl hehehe (im sorda gothic myself so dun kill me!! *cowers in corner*) well i hope you like my suggestions enough ranting from me. keep up the good work!!
Ja!
~DarkSetoKaiba/DarkAngel~ |
Reviewed By: moonymonster On: February 21, 2003 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ratings, they don't go to eleven! Meh...oh well....very cool! I like this fic very much! ^^ Poor Moku-chan and Seto though...but hey, Seto killed the bastard so yea! *goes to read Seto's Pain*
Moony Rating: 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMIGOSH! YOU GOT AN ELEVEN!!!!!!! THATS GREAT!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
ok! make ryou a monk.. mokuba a magician(so), hirla a magician helper! hama can be a... bunny!
they can eat all kinds a food! like all the food on the list! and if there's any left overs i'll eat em!... it should be a halloween party! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 22:22 CST
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just as long as joey can be a dog. even i think he looks kawaii in a dog suit. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mokuba is a cat and hirla is a bird and hama can be a bunny(snif*not yugi*snif)
umm it shuded be a halloween party and the food ...? candy all kinds of candy(suger high heheheheh)
your so so... , NO 3SAM!!!
but you gave us some lemonaid so now we muse bow be for you the all cool goddiss that you are !
dame you all bow to her!!!!!!
oh and my editor will "HOPFULY" get his ass over hear an edit my story so u can read it,
by
me ^.^
it din't work ???? |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mokuba is a cat and hirla is a bird and hama can be a bunny(snif*not yugi*snif)
umm it shuded be a halloween party and the food ...? candy all kinds of candy(suger high heheheheh)
your so so... ,font color="blue"> NO 3SAM!!!
but you gave us some lemonaid so now we muse bow be for you the all cool goddiss that you are !
dame you all bow to her!!!!!!
oh and my editor will "HOPFULY" get his ass over hear an edit my story so u can read it,
by
me ^.^ |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
halo! this chp was pretty good. costume party, ne? i think both seto and noa should be sex slaves to seth, and mabey yami as the dark magician and yugi as the dark magician girl ^^. shouldnt it be halloween? cuz why would they were costumes to a b-day party? o'.'o. by the way, r u writtin any digimon fics? ne wayz, hope more comes soon!^__^ and dmabey ryou can be a cat? i dunt really have any other ideas with him... |
Reviewed By: DarkSetoKaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH OH! A good idea for a costume for Ryou-Chan! ryou can be a munk! or..OH! make him look like legolas but not an elf! yeah i can picture ryou as that...anyways for Honda..umm..he can be dressed up as a vampire dude. and Jounouchi...hmm he can be dressed up as one of those bad-ass gothic dudes, you know with the baggy black pants and black sleeveless shirts, you get the idea, now for shizuka and kukki...hrm...i'll have to say kukki is more the tomboy type so she could go as yami the king of games. with these leather skin tight hip-hugger pants on and a black sleeveless shirt and stuff but she doesnt have to do her hair up. and uhm..shizuka..she can be a princess..and mokuba..he can go as his brother! lol..hama..hrm..He can go as mokuba..or maybe he can go as one of Seth or Yami's servants since they're going as important egpytian ppl..Anyways thats all og my ideas. hope you like them. great story btw keep it up!!
~DarkSetoKaiba/DarkAngel~ |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
^^;; Gomen nasai... I really didn't mean to forget! Your lemons are getting better though, and I really liked that it was uke Seto!! ^_^ *winks* You might want to describe Noa again soon, because I keep forgetting he's, well, taller now. Excellent character handling (though I think I forgot to mention in an earlier chapter that Mokuba's hospital room must have been huge to fit that many people in it!) and love how protective and playful Seth is! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Magician Girl Of Chaos Night On: February 18, 2003 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Lemon! Yah, I have a weird mind, but that wsa a really good chapter, both of them. You really are a goddess, the goddess of liturature. I really wish your idea's were on the show, but alas, they aren't. Damn dubbers, they spoil everything! Let's kill them!
( Runs off to kill the dubbers for they cool stuff they cut out) |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah! great! he!stupid yugha! someone should kill her with a broken piece of glass! yah! die! go ryou! go bakura! go seto! go go go seto! seth, yugi, ect! yah! .... i'm not strange am I? |
Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 18, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
( Has A sword, 6 daggers, and a magic quiver that keeps refilling with fire arrows) KK-san, L absolutly love the plot twists! They are gret! I htink you should have the gang use Pegasus to find out what Yugha's intentions really are! Anyway that city I wsa building is gonna take a while, but it'll be worth it! Love your fic, so keep updating! Also, I would have written something sonner on "Cold", but I got punished from the computer. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter. can't wait for the next. I'll just beat up Yugha until the next chpater. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaahhhh i'm going to pull a star war thing and put the last one first becuse the first one dos'n wont to work with me. (bad muse)
ummm...moku-kun can be ...? I would say a bunny but thats yugi.so moku-kun can be a cat but an egyption cat?
happy b-day if i forget to tel you on your b-day
oh and happy presadant day!
if I lived in DC I would run around huging all the monument but I live in hawaii were it's 75 outside ^_^ and all I can go hug is the queens palcs.
will it(my story) may be up at the end of the day.
soooooo
i lov ur story^.^ |
Reviewed By: chara (firedryad) On: February 16, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chara- *melts* this is the kawaii-est of all. so cute! is something gonna happen to hama? this fic is really really good! hope the next chp come in soon... though im begining to thing this should be rated R, theres not really a lemon is there? o'.'o. hope the next chapter comes soon! uh... another word for penis? member, rod, length, dick, etc...
the other person using this account- u read too much hentai. its bad for u!
chara- shut up. hey, am i the first to answer ur question? lol |
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