| "Inside a water bubble" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story and all of it chapters. I don't like that Inu Yasha had to leave 0_o. Well five years aint that bad???? Keep on translating the story. Oh and congrats on your high score on english. |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 19:08 CST
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thats sad... and only the 4th chappy 2.
(u-u)>[watch he goes and forgets her...that would be even sadder.]
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dont do that. |
Reviewed By: Kagome-chan On: January 25, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRIGHT MORE |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 24, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please oh please continue. |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
awww so sweet. just a nfew grammatical errors, but you gave a reason so i forgive!
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('.^)>[hope the next chappys are as cute as this one, fluff packed!] |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 23, 2003 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Next chapter pleeze. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:19 CST
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aww, that was so great! are you done? or will you write more?
Mara |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
you know i always find it funny that foreign speakers usually actually have better grammar than we ourselves do. you did an excellent job in translating your fic. the only errors i picked up were two or three tense errors, which is ok. truth be known, i see a lot more errors in the other english speaking writer's stories.
anyway, this is interesting, i really like it. i haven't read all the chapters (only ch 1 so far) but i'll read the rest after i send this review.
it's so cool to meet an italian otaku (anime fan). i've been taking italian for 5 to 6 years now in my school, and i'm in my first year of japanese right now. if you'd like to talk (either italian or english, though my grammar will probably be a whole lot worse than yours) i'd absolutely love to. just email me:
onejoy1@pobox.com
Mara |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
P.S...........I LIKE YOU^________________^
put on a happy face:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 18:23 CST
Comment/Review:
im baaaaaaackkkkkkk.........just read your latest chapter love it!!!!!! hope u get the next chapter up soon!!!!
BYE;p |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 20, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it. Update,update,update... |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
sesshoumaru laughing like a madman?
one face for that.
o.0 0.o O.O 0.O
okay so maybe that's 4
but good job fixing up the POV problems, it's way less confusing now! |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im the first reviewer!!bwahahahahahhahahahaha!!!*takes a deep breath*
anyways i dont like your story.............I LOVE IT!!!!........sorry if i scared*bwahahahahahahaha!!!* you....PLEASE write more, more, MORE!!!well i gota go now the leprechauns are telling me to burn things*takes out book of matches and walks out the door laughing(bwahahahahahahahahaha!!!!)*
BYE;p
obssesivefangirl sgining off!!
PeAcE BaBy yeah!;}
i hav so many PrObLeMs! O.o O.O o.O |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 29, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*POUT* No more?. Do u hav writerblock? |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 07, 2003 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
*I love you because only you can touch my heart* (R) HOWEVER... Make it NC-17 (evil smile) |
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