"Captivation" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: brian On: February 13, 2003 15:07 CST Comment/Review: *whew* Finally can breath now that you've updated!
Love Relena but Heero's going to kill her when he gets back. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 13, 2003 07:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Une redemption was a nice touch. Without Trieze she's pretty sane and cool. Nice chapter. Waiting for the fur to fly when Heero comes back. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: February 13, 2003 13:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Still hate historical romance but this is not bad for a romantic epic type story. I usually don't like them but this is kind of good. Heero and Relena's relationship is what got me interested. |
Reviewed By: no pen name On: February 14, 2003 07:55 CST Comment/Review: Glad to see Une all normal and the hint of Trowa liking her was sweet. Though Relena's kindness toward her looks like it'll backfire on her w/ Heero. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 14, 2003 13:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Roads looking a little rocky for Relena and Heero, huh? No! |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: February 06, 2003 17:43 CST Comment/Review: Why did you do that Relena ? Why, girl? Are you crazy? Writing gets better and better. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: February 05, 2003 08:37 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: There's probabl going to be hell to pay for Relena when Heero gets back. I'm starting to think Une isn't the psycho I thought she was. |
Reviewed By: Carrie "AngelBaby" M. On: January 30, 2003 20:09 CST Comment/Review: I normally hate historical romances and the dialogue. Well, I still do. but I do like your fic. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: January 30, 2003 08:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, so Heero is serious about Relena and Dr. Jaye thinks she's trouble. Well, like Heero said if he had to choose it wouldn't be the Dr.! |
Reviewed By: Chun Li On: January 30, 2003 07:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aw, Heero's defending his girls honor. Dr. Jayne sounds like a jerk. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Cassie On: January 29, 2003 20:27 CST Comment/Review: Heero and Relena will finally get together, right? And soon I hope. LOL. |
Reviewed By: purple rain On: January 26, 2003 15:48 CST Comment/Review: Got nothing to say except keep pushing out terrific chapters... |
Reviewed By: LisaAndrew On: January 25, 2003 12:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your verson of Wufei is slightly more likable than the series. But he's cool either way. |
Reviewed By: Brian On: January 24, 2003 22:43 CST Comment/Review: *gasping for breathe* need next chapter to survive... |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 23, 2003 09:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DUN, DUN, DUN! Une owns the mill? Interesting. |
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