Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 12:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay. It was very cutesy. And sweet. You show the relationship very well. And the spelling and grammar was a relief[I had just read a horribly spelled story, thanks for the pick up!], perfect 10 there. But why would Vegeta act this way? You'd think Trunks was engaged to a decendant of Freiza or something. I assume all will be revealed in due time, so I eagerly await the next installment. But honestly-Vegeta's behavior is baffling, not to mention extremely immature. You'd think he'd have other things to do with his time. Okay, I'll shut up now! I just cannot wait until you update this. |
