| "Imperial Amusements" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: February 07, 2003 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oOoOo So Veggie's a lil rebel huh? cool! you've got a kick ass story goin' here. Yamcha's such a loser, i laughed when i saw Bulma teach him a thing or two. ^_^
Love the lemon! Keep up yer excellent work cause you've got me hooked. you really have alot of talent.
Can't wait to see when the new chapter is up! |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: February 19, 2003 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay an update!! ^_^ it's about time! lol
I'm loving how Bulma has this bad ass image and how no one really wants to cross her. it's actually the same in the series too. ^_^ Man Radditz is such a pric; if i were bulma, i'd tare him apart with my bare hands. Vegeta is quite a devious man. hehe ^_^ i can't wait to see how things in the palace go and how Vegeta's pursueing of bulma will turn out. eh heh..perhaps we all know already. ^_^
anyways, keep up the good work and i look forward to yer new updates!! take care |
Reviewed By: tapeaka On: February 15, 2003 14:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i liked a whole lot cant wait tillthe next chapter |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 16:35 EST
Comment/Review:
No Chi Chi! Stay away from Yamcha!! Aaahhh! Nightmares. Uh sorry. Good chapter. Yummy lemon! :) |
Reviewed By: Carollla On: January 26, 2003 20:58 EST
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WOW! This is a great start on a great fan fic!!!!! Keep up the good work!! And please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!!! :-) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blink* What a dream .... --uh, it WAS a dream, right???
*lol* Loved how she kicked Yamcha's ass!!
Write more soon! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 15:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's the first chapy>? |
Reviewed By: vegetasmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 09:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your story when it was on ff.net . all 16 chapters. r u still updating on your site? hope so. I've been waiting ages for you to post!! please don't keep me waiting to long!!ok? I've been faithfully following this story since your first chapter. cause I love it!!thanks!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 02:12 EST
Comment/Review:
I was going to read your story when I realized that you only have chapter2 and 3 posted. Did something happen to your first chapter? :( |
Reviewed By: the total lunatic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is wow... |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 00:23 EST
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A ha ha! She shattered his jaw! I love it! Yamcha this royal wuss! Heh heh. Cant' wait to see what happens next time! |
Reviewed By: eljoebla On: January 22, 2003 22:05 EST
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add some more chapters please sounds good so far |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 03:15 EST
Comment/Review:
cool so far can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 19:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is interesting. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Cool... so far, so good... update soon |
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