| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have now read both Lemonade stories! THEY RULE! Ummm is chapter 15 the last one in the sequel? If it isn't UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: milady On: June 15, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and I hope you update it soon...
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Reviewed By: inu-ears On: May 29, 2004 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!! please update soon!
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Title: It's me Miss Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 19, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! I've been printing this story out, and I don't think the teachers like me coming in empty handed and leaving out with a thick stack. But I like the long chapters and this is the best sequel ever. Well I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with a squel. I like it so keep up the good work. Love MN
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: May 14, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Great chapter. I can't believe I hadn't checked up until now! Well, glad you updated. ^_^
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Reviewed By: stephino On: April 29, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! i was afraid you forgot this storie^^, i do have a bit of constructive critisisum...the constant talk or "aura" is really annoying. ut you have a great writing talent
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 12:56 CDT
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So this Inuyasha did know Kagome at fifteen... But this Kagome didn't grow up in Tokyo or go through that well. Did something happen to make her forget, or is it some previous incarnation Inuyasha remembers? (Reads on) Okay, so it is. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The cutest little dead tart this side of the well, eh Yash?" ~~~ But what's this? The underplot thickens; it thickens like thick things.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:33 CDT
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I read the first 13 chapters on the Hero in the 21st Century site and have been waiting and waiting for more. Please continue on!
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Reviewed By: Tori16 On: April 04, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another Update! I can see the stage being set for a bit of remorse from Kikyou. Interesting that she showed up at all. As always, I enjoyed this chapter and am hoping that you won't make us wait so long for the next update!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I am glad you updated. ^_^ I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 13:17 CST
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Score! Chapter from Fujifunmum! This piece didn't feel as "complete" as other chapters have. It seemed more like a bunch of scenes thrown together than a unified chapter, but they were all good ones. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I, too, hope for the illumination of Inuyasha's past.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 20:05 CST
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Update please update this story is really good oh yeah i would like to hear kagome and Inuyasha say i love you to each other i don't think they say it enough
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Title: Autumn_Winds_42069
Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds_42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 00:09 CST
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WOW! I didn't think that you were on Mediaminer. I read your story on hero 21 fanfics. That just really amazes me that you are on here too. Your story was what got me interested in reading fanfics in the first place so will you plz update?
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Title: Creepy
Reviewed By: V4mps On: February 10, 2004 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason i marked down on the origionality/creativity is because inu/kagome stories have happened before... but never quite like this. Nice story, keep it up. Vamps
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Title: Please updated!
Reviewed By: LadyPantera On: January 14, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been loving your lemonade fics!! Please tell me you'll be finishing Lemonade, too! Please, please, please!! (with a cherry on top?)
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