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 Reviewed By: Marianne Me.  On: March 24, 2003 14:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My review is...DAMN! Very interesting. Heero rescuing that family was just something he'd do, but it wasn't smart of him to leave Relena alone. Hope she's still there when he comes back.
 Reviewed By: Jason  On: February 22, 2003 15:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy Crap! I'd forgotten about reviewing. Had to go read chapters 7 and 8 and I'm still impressed by all the emotion. If people aren't convinced that Heero does love Relena, then they are BLIND!
 Reviewed By: Bender  On: February 22, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm going to get you for cruel and inhuman punishment! What a place to stop at! AHHHHHHHHH!
 Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura  On: February 20, 2003 12:07 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's impolite to say this, but Heero really needs to get laid. The boy's losing it over not being with Relena. Come one, they need each other!
 Reviewed By: Cleao  On: February 11, 2003 08:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was unbeliveable! Awesome chapter. Boy, Heero is so tortured over his feelings for Relena. Very romantic and disturbing at the same time. Well, I didn't think it was horrible he felt her up while she was out cold. He's in love and VERY sexually repressed. Besides, Relena probably wouldn't mind at all. =D
 Reviewed By: ALL CAPS  On: February 11, 2003 14:07 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHHHH! THAT WAS GREAT. NOW I KNOW HEERO CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT RELENA. HE'S LOSING IT ALREADY WITHOUT HER. OH, PLEASE LET THEM MAKEUP WHILE THEY HAVE THAT TIME ALONE. PLEASE!!!
 Reviewed By: tammy  On: February 11, 2003 14:21 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy crap, this sh** just keeps getting better. Was blown away by heero's emotions for relena.
Totally sweet how much he needs her. Just don't maim Quatre too much!
 Reviewed By: Sano  On: February 11, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gah, don't leave it there! Just when it was getting so good...damn, gotta wait for the next update. Geez!
 Reviewed By: Chun Li  On: February 12, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The thoughts going through Heero's mind are wild, and tortured. I liked how you showed his thoughts thru the bungled kidnapping. And he really went wild when he was with Relena. Poor boy needs her bad. Hope he gets her. *hint, hint, HINT* ^^
 Reviewed By: Marianne Me.  On: February 12, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, man smoking scene. Knew Heero's repressed feelings would come out sooner or later. You're killing me!
 Reviewed By: faith e.e  On: February 12, 2003 23:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 set my computer on fire! Talk about intense emotions. Whew! Is Relena going to be over her drugged induced trip next chapter? Looking forward to some honest to goodness roamnce.
 Reviewed By: *****  On: February 15, 2003 09:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cliffhangers are the cruelest writers invention known to man! Both chapters were wild, especially chapter 8. Doesn't get much better than this.
 Reviewed By: Paul  On: February 06, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dag, in the chest?! That was harsh. Well, as long as you don't kill him off or cripple him, I don't care. Now where's his boy Trowa in all this mess?
 Reviewed By: Shinta Himura  On: February 05, 2003 08:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, the other shoe DID drop. I knew it. Quatre sounded a little bitter about the whole wedding arrangement. Guess he's ticked he can't marry (legally) the one he loves. Depressing to say the least. I feel for everyone.
 Reviewed By: Marianne Me.  On: February 05, 2003 08:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm lowering my pitchfork...I can't believe...hurt..Quatre? Definitely high drama scene there. I was wondering why you had an earlier scene with Relena talking to those students. Now I know. Smooth job.
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