| "Unexpected Opportunities" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best.....lemon...EVER!!!!!!!!!! I hate when lemons are like 50 words. I love it when they're drawn out and have lots of details. And this was definitely drawn out :) I love this idea of yours because it's not like every other inukag lemon on the web. You did an amazing job! Thanks for writing it :)
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Reviewed By: Fairygirl13 On: February 02, 2008 14:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was like...wow. Awsome story, you should write more to it I mean it was like...wow. Just wow! I SERIOUS WRITE MORE DAMMIT!
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:42 EDT
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Oh. My. Kami! That was amazing! The absolute longest, and one of the best written lemons I've ever read. I loved it. Wonderful work!
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Title: qwestion
Reviewed By: lunaofeve [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 12:01 EST
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very nice, i just have one thing to nit pick if her hands were free to hit inuyasha then why didn't she pull the gag off
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...one of the best described and detailed lemons Ive read in a while. Most excellent indeed. Great from beginning to end. Simply loved it. Thank you for writing it and sharing.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS SO F**KING AWESOME, EVEN IF IT IS KNDA GROSS. GOOD JOB, JUST KEEP WRITING.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 18:47 EDT
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the best lemon ever!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit that made me horny! i'm all wet well, great job write some more lemons i love how your one shot has a story and lemon. it was awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 00:49 EST
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Oh, god. Thinking of cold things... Damn. Inuyasha bound and gagged? Shit, who wouldn't do what Kagome did? Well, awesomely written, and off to have a cold shower...
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: AW555 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, great lemon, and great plot. You should really think about a sequel!
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Title: woaaaa.......
Reviewed By: KagomeHigerashi On: August 29, 2005 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! OMFG!! EAT ME!!! You made me wet...god..nice going. HOW AM I GONA EXPLAIN THAT TO MY BOYFRIEND!?!?!? lol jk! Well luv ya!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that;s good...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: Ancient Wolf On: June 30, 2005 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good descriptions and you capture the tension of the moments very well. I was almost cheering for Inuyasha when he was chasing kagome.
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Title: Woah doggie ^__^
Reviewed By: EbilJo (nli) On: June 12, 2005 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish there were higher ratings than ten. You deserve a million. I've read some pretty stupid stories out there, and this is NOT one of them. Not only was it AMAZING, it wasn't written in the format of "OMGWTFBBQ!!!11!!1" and "tEH puPPEh wuZ coOl". ^__^ Great story!! Lurved it a lot. And I agree that someone should make some sort of anime episode kinda like that. Rofl. An anime porno. On Cartoon Network. That would be funny. ANYway...enjoyed the story and would love to see more. ^_^ *goes off to look and see if you've written more* You're a great author!!
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