| "Unexpected Opportunities" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: arisu-the-pink On: February 20, 2004 22:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I second Kagney and Fuyumiko! Wow - the best one I've read so far and... I need a cold shower. Or a boyfriend.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story. i hope that you write more inuyasha/kagome fics. love ya ja ne
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Title: Maybe the goddamn Sun blew up in my room...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me or is everyone feeling like the room's on fire after reading this fic?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 17:31 EST
Comment/Review:
really really good!!
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Title: Unexpected Opportunities
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great...I liked it:D...I really liked that:D
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: December 02, 2003 13:04 EST
Comment/Review:
This was by far the best fanfic that I've read so far. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Hellwise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 22:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
nice story line and i love the fact that she's the aggressor.
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, Ookami-chan, you reign supreme! I love you story. I love all your stories. You are definitely my favorite author. I am still shaking from what I read. You are the best lemon writer I have come across. That was AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME. Don't stop! :D |
Reviewed By: smilesdarkly On: August 19, 2003 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic was so good, I had to comment, though I usually don't leave reviews. That is one of the best lemons I've read, and I've read many.
*fans self* You write extremely well and creatively. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: samiam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...god!!!!that was good!!! whew!! need a cold drink after that one^_^ great chemistry b/w Inu-Kag!!!! need I say I loved it and write some more!!?? |
Reviewed By: LadyCatBailey On: July 07, 2003 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O Holy SHIT dude. *eyes InuYasha* Whew. WHEW. Girl, that was...wow...okay I'm so incoherent at the moment, just ignore me. XD Lets just say it hot in here. Its gettin' hot in herre...so take off all your clothes...*gets weird looks and sweatdrops*
Your writing style is wonderful, it really flows, and the way you write your lemons isn't all "he was in and out and in and out and she liked that. It was good. The end!", which makes me want to rip out someones throat. I'm vilent, I know. lol
Meanwhile, my ass is buying a red tie in hopes of finding a hanyou to gag with it ;)
Cat |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaaamn okay well I'm aroused...*watches as people watch her with sweatdrops* Anyways this was defintitely a high entertainment story if I do say so myself. Personally I can't write a lemon scene if my life depended on it...I mean 'he pumped into and pumped again' is kind of sad it makes u think of that one song Pump Pump Pump Pump It Up or sumthing like that. Okay so technically thats how my friend said it but I laughed so hard I almost peed in my panties. Hmm maybe I should make bloppers...Ok well anyways if u decide to have any sequels I won't mind at all...*smirks* No not me... |
Reviewed By: Charity/Entity On: April 27, 2003 02:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww that was really good but my favorite part was the edn were he covers her with his enveloping sleeves that was so Fucking cute I loved it I had to read that little part twice it was so damn cute I loved it keep writing your amazing LEMONS!!!!! I just went to your author Bio and realised that I have read nearly all of your fics except one I think and I was like wow she (he?) wrote those as well they were godd hehe no wonderI liked them all I have a tendency to like wokrs/fics done by the same author so once I have found an Author(ess) that I lke I usually try to keep a look out for others of theire so you keep writing I will keep reading so yeah Love em wow I actually wrote a review woohoo hehe sorry bye!!!!!
~~~~~~five is such a magic number (reference to Gundam Wing and other Five Peopled- groups of Hot Sexy Bishies) |
Reviewed By: catchfire On: April 17, 2003 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was one good lemon. One of the best I've seen in any fandom. I'd like to see you continue this story. Maybe make it a series. I'd like to see what happens when Kagome wakes up. How pissed off is she going to be about her clothes being so torn she can't wear them? Bet she makes Inuyasha sit.and maybe give up his outer robe. At least until they can find some new clothes for her. Either way keep writing. You're really good. |
Reviewed By: Aya On: April 09, 2003 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I love your lemons, and the end for this one... I'm begging you, write anyother chapter! PLEASE! it's so good. |
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