| "Unexpected Opportunities" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaaamn okay well I'm aroused...*watches as people watch her with sweatdrops* Anyways this was defintitely a high entertainment story if I do say so myself. Personally I can't write a lemon scene if my life depended on it...I mean 'he pumped into and pumped again' is kind of sad it makes u think of that one song Pump Pump Pump Pump It Up or sumthing like that. Okay so technically thats how my friend said it but I laughed so hard I almost peed in my panties. Hmm maybe I should make bloppers...Ok well anyways if u decide to have any sequels I won't mind at all...*smirks* No not me... |
Reviewed By: Charity/Entity On: April 27, 2003 02:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww that was really good but my favorite part was the edn were he covers her with his enveloping sleeves that was so Fucking cute I loved it I had to read that little part twice it was so damn cute I loved it keep writing your amazing LEMONS!!!!! I just went to your author Bio and realised that I have read nearly all of your fics except one I think and I was like wow she (he?) wrote those as well they were godd hehe no wonderI liked them all I have a tendency to like wokrs/fics done by the same author so once I have found an Author(ess) that I lke I usually try to keep a look out for others of theire so you keep writing I will keep reading so yeah Love em wow I actually wrote a review woohoo hehe sorry bye!!!!!
~~~~~~five is such a magic number (reference to Gundam Wing and other Five Peopled- groups of Hot Sexy Bishies) |
Reviewed By: catchfire On: April 17, 2003 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was one good lemon. One of the best I've seen in any fandom. I'd like to see you continue this story. Maybe make it a series. I'd like to see what happens when Kagome wakes up. How pissed off is she going to be about her clothes being so torn she can't wear them? Bet she makes Inuyasha sit.and maybe give up his outer robe. At least until they can find some new clothes for her. Either way keep writing. You're really good. |
Reviewed By: Aya On: April 09, 2003 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I love your lemons, and the end for this one... I'm begging you, write anyother chapter! PLEASE! it's so good. |
Reviewed By: Anime~Angel On: April 05, 2003 01:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best fricking Inuyasha fic I have ever read. And I'm not just saying that. I am now your biggest fan. ^.^V |
Reviewed By: Miyuu On: March 23, 2003 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was incredible! Please write another one like it, I loved the part where Kagome had Inuyasha tied up and she teased him! It was great! Please, write another story soon! You are a very talented writer and I really do think that you should major in it in your life!
M i y u u |
Reviewed By: xXk a g o m eXx On: April 03, 2003 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondeful! Iv'e never read such a good lemon. So origanal, I love all ya stories.
Ja ^^ |
Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 17:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! O_O LOL! I loved this fic! I loved the slight edge that suffused the whole thing! Now if only "Turnabout" and this would collide....^_^* I liked the cat-and-mouse going on--it was something different than the usual ones! =D Continue? |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 15, 2003 15:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please read responsibly because this stuff is intoxicating! |
Reviewed By: InuYasha Fan On: February 13, 2003 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great very creative, I really enjoyed it. You have to do some more Fanfics. |
Reviewed By: scarlet halo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE! i love your fics, your a great writer, iv read mayne of them, including turnablout is fair play, yes, the whole thing, and its great, i love this one! im an inuyasha fanfic writer myself, i hope to be as good as you some day |
Reviewed By: ogeez On: February 01, 2003 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woahhhh! That was lethal! Incredible job! I'd love to see a sequal! I especially like the way Inu Yasha changed from feral to gently to protective to ruthless, and you still managed to keep him consistantly in character. I'm keeping my hopes high that I'll see more of your work in the future. Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Moondreamer On: February 01, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was very descriptive! It was unlike anything I have read before. Your an excellent author,please keep up the great work!Font Color |
Reviewed By: Moondreamer On: February 01, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was very descriptive! It was unlike anything I have read before. Your an excellent author,please keep up the great work!Font Color |
Reviewed By: Janine On: January 30, 2003 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN GIRL! Another excellent fic. And I have to say you write the BEST lemon fics out there IMHO. Can't wait for your next one. ^_- |
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