| "Tenshi no Bisei" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sugar Honey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent! ^o^
Your writing is clear, and your spelling & grammar is also very good (though I did catch a couple of typos, but that's nothing to fuss over. ^.~ ) And you had good descriptions. ^.^ I especially liked your characterizations of Touma and Ryuichi -- right on the mark. ^_^
You set up the lemon scene very nicely with the mood you created at the end. So sappy.. ;_; And very sweet.
I really want to read the next chapter! ^o^ |
Reviewed By: T On: January 23, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to find out what will happen next.
As per usual Touma is very secretive, but even
K-san doesn't even know. This is very interesting and I will be looking for the next chapter. |
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