| "Tenshi no Bisei" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 23:20 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE THE GODDAMN NEXT CHAPTER LEST MY FOOT FIND YOUR ASS!*ahem* As you can see I liked it! It was very well writen and I think you should continue... You do realise there are like 14 others who agree with me don't you!? C'mon! NEXT CHAPPIE ALREADY!
|
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: krisnkriss@hotmail.com On: February 15, 2004 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my gosh, you have to continue this fic! What's wrong with Ryuichi that is causing him to collapse? Are you going ot kill him??! ~wails~ NOOOO....you can't kill Ryu-chan! Anyway, please hurry up and update, I love Tohma/Ryuichi. Will you email me when you update? I left my email addy in the nickname field. Thanks, and great story!!!! Kriss
|
Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray for Tohma/Ryuichi pairings!!! There aren't enough of them! Please please finish this off! I am dying to know what's going on with Ryuichi and if they will both feel the same in the morning after all the alcohol has worn off! ehehehe.. Please write this more! It rules...-Descendant
|
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOI! *.* I wanna see the lemon chapter! This fic is so sad, and yet so sweet. Write more! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
For the love of god write more! This is getting good! Poor Ryuichi san! What happenend to him! *sobs hysterically* Toma will make it better right!?.... If he's not to depressed over Mika chan! Ahhh Angst over load! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I LOVE IT!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! It suits the mood of Graitation and must be finished!
|
Reviewed By: kittens hope On: September 24, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is so clear and sweet, its a delight to read. I love the way you've set up for the next chapter. You are an excellent writer. It's great to see a fic with Touma and Ryuichi. Please write the next couple of chapters *Beg Beg* *cute glittering puppy dog eyes*
|
Reviewed By: Ai_chi On: June 02, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story ^^ ... it's kinda sweet ... and i was really screaming as i read the name "toto" ^________^ |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: May 31, 2003 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So beautiful and sad. Please write more. I really want to know what happened to Ryuichi. Continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Aya On: May 19, 2003 00:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic, enjoyed it, it's cute, please continue! |
Reviewed By: Shae-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 03:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Write more!! MORE!! I want more now damn it! >. |
Reviewed By: Gina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU GOT TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!! if not, send me the chappie, na no da? PLEASE!!!!! My address is Dreamgina955@yahoo.com. K? buh-bye~! |
Reviewed By: Yami Yosei On: March 04, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEE! You have to continue! Please!!! It was really good T_T I want to know whats wrong with poor Ryu-kun. Your style of writing was really good and I havent seen many Tohma/Ryuichi fics (mabey I'm just blind) But anyhow, great fic, and please hurry on the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The least you could do is hurry up! Don't leave us hanging! I really like your way of writing and I didn't mind any of the typos. Keep it up!
Ja na! |
Reviewed By: Sugar Honey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent! ^o^
Your writing is clear, and your spelling & grammar is also very good (though I did catch a couple of typos, but that's nothing to fuss over. ^.~ ) And you had good descriptions. ^.^ I especially liked your characterizations of Touma and Ryuichi -- right on the mark. ^_^
You set up the lemon scene very nicely with the mood you created at the end. So sappy.. ;_; And very sweet.
I really want to read the next chapter! ^o^ |
Reviewed By: T On: January 23, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to find out what will happen next.
As per usual Touma is very secretive, but even
K-san doesn't even know. This is very interesting and I will be looking for the next chapter. |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
