| "Playing the Game" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: utsukushi dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, i love this fic!!! I'm sorry about ur friend. I recently got over a depression, so take ur time writing ur next chap, we'll understand. Anyway this is a great story, you really have a nice plot going on here. If you ever need someone to talk to just e-mail or im me. X0japanimefanx0@aol.com. My sn is the same w/o the @aol.com ~_^ Ja |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2003 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, a playboy inuyasha and a vixen kagome...oh the possibilities.
update soon! |
Reviewed By: iyakahi On: April 27, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!!!! Please hurry and update!!!! Well, basically, i don't think Kikyou should be in it..but if she is...well...make her seem like a really evil person k? ^-^ Inu/Kag rules!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: fishy! On: April 26, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait dat long! hafta continue da story! |
Reviewed By: giggles On: April 26, 2003 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yea! hehe...inuyasha's bout to me his match! |
Reviewed By: yupperz2003 On: April 26, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVE IT!!! CONTINUE PLEASE U R BOOKMARKED! |
Reviewed By: Nice On: April 28, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! I love all the descriptions and backgrounds that you give us. That's so cool! Go Kagome!
Hmm, why would Sess say she's out of Inuyasha's range? I mean, she's looking for someone new. |
Reviewed By: utsukushi On: April 22, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I can really see this fic going somewhere. Please update soon, it has a really good plot and so its amazing. You really don't seem like your new to this. Don't worry you'll do fine in writing it kiikii. Hope ya update soon. ;-)
X0japanimefanx0@aol.com same goes my sn, good luck. Ja ne ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Cat On: April 22, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. So what type of girl is Kag gonna be? I can see her as Miss super prim while Inu tries to seduce her :).
He, just my idea. Keep writing. This is cool. |
Reviewed By: OMG! On: April 22, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this so very much. Please, please, please keep writting more and soon. Don't make us wait a whole month for just one chapter. I really like this story but I don't think this chappie was long enough but it did give us alot of detail. Oh yeah, DON"T add Kikyou into this story. I just don't see the use of here being in ANY stories; she always usually just shows up being Inu's ex then gettin' her ass kicked by an angry Kagome. To me, it's just wasted time. :)
---Chow! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"some lemony-flavored goodness in it..."
hmm, seems good....
Yay ! loved it !! please go on soon !!
I love this heated brutality between the two of them ...
pllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssse, don't make us wait !
Like we say in France : "allumez le feu !"
*light the fire !!*
I wanna see sparks flying between them !
Make it lovely , make it harsh, make it sweaty and sweet ...
Let us feel the sparks of love for them ^^
*wink wink*
Oh , by the way : loved it ^^
you're doing great ^^
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleas,please don't add kikkyo in the middle of it .
For once, I wanna see a fic where Kagome is Inuyasha ONLY concern.
You rock ! You don't need her in the middle of your story , you already rock yet ! Go on like this, 'n it'll be perfect^^
*well , that's my own point of view^^* |
Reviewed By: alexis On: June 02, 2003 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really good story, you're an awesome writer! I can't wait to see what happens when Inuyasha & Kagome finally meet. Please update soon, and PLEASE no kikyo! |
Reviewed By: local gurl On: May 04, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and plz write the next chapterz!
i love these types of fanfics!
the beginnings very good!
hurry the suspence is killing me!
i hope you are not going to add pages where you describe the other characters because that will really annoy me. oh and i agree with OMG. don't add kikyo.
seeya! |
Reviewed By: jane On: July 22, 2003 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story today and I have to say it's really really good! UPDATE SOON PLEASE. I want to see some more inu/kag interaction. I also have to agree w/ the other people about not adding kikyo, I personally don't like the bitch. But anywho, you're donig a great job and please continue soon. |
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