| "One By One My Friends Shall Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Shamona:... holy shiiit.../ Celine: for ra's sakes, this story is spooky... is it Yugi gonna die?? Omg, I hope not.../ Riz: EEK! It's super scary...UPDATEMORE! ^_____^ UPDAte! update! update! oR, i'LL E-MAIL YOU INSTEAD!
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Title: i like this!!
Reviewed By: k On: February 21, 2004 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story,i love horror.PLEASE go on with this
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Reviewed By: LongLiveJoey On: December 19, 2003 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
L.L.J.:I loved it Pleeeesssse update more!!!!!!!! Joey:That fanfic creaped me out*Joey whines like a puppy* L.L.J.:I hope I wont have to change my name. Joey:I wont get hurt. Will I? L.L.J.:*shrugs* Joey:I better not or Ill... L.L.J.:better go please update more
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Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8tergurl On: July 21, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update and update often! Was very scary. Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8tergurl On: July 21, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shinigama:Very original, but only 11 reviews? Come on people! This is a great fic! Plus, I wanna read more!!! Oh, Yuka, your a very talented person!
Seto: Your just say that so she will hurry up and update.
Shinigama: *covers his mouth w/hand* shh! she don't know that! Oops.
Joey: I'm serious when I say she's good!
Shini.: Me too!
All: UPDATE PLEASE!!!WE'RE SLOWLY GOING CRAZY!!!!
(p.s.:Update pwease)
(p.s.s.:I'm done, I swear!) |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I orginally hate spooky stories but this was great! keep going. |
Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8tergurl On: July 05, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was as scary as hell..... well maybe scarier being that i've been there and it's quite dull.:P j/k I have to turn on the lights in the hallway @ night now, but keep writing this 1! It has a good pairing and the plot is original!! Update more often!! |
Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, I'm really disturbed by this one!! If you keep writing i'll come out! I'm glad i saw this story! Please continue before these fucking dust
bunnies eat me alive!! AHHH! |
Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, I'm really disturbed by this one!! *runs away from computor and hides under couch* If you keep writing i'll come out! I'm glad i saw this story! Please continue before these fucking dust
bunnies eat me alive!! AHHH! |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 13:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy shit. When I was little I never-ever-ever slept with stuffed animals and dolls for that reason!!! I'm wicked freaked out now. You're a really good writer, I can't wait to read more of this story!! |
Reviewed By: Kaibas Souless embodyment On: April 13, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
One two...
hes coming for you...
three four...
better lock the door...
five six...
gra your crusafix...
nine ten...
Here he comes again...
It just came to mind. Continue to write, it isnt ofte that something is unique.
Senceryly,
Seto Kaiba |
Reviewed By: Ceraya/Reiko On: January 26, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
hey
reiko: so this man is having a nightmare, spirit's will hunt him down for sure.
ceraya: nonesence, dun worry jounouchi. |
Reviewed By: ls2 On: January 22, 2003 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
It was great. Nice and spooky and good pairing. Hope you post more soon. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEK! That was scary! *hides under computer desk* SAVE ME! |
Reviewed By: Seto On: January 22, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is great. but can u please update more often |
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