| "Chocolate Ice Cream" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhhhh add more soon |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 01, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMMM! Yummy ! Boy What would I give to wake up like that ! I love this fic its awesome! Keep it coming !! But damn it if I was Bulma I could have shot him for leaving her like that damn! THAT WAS bad SHAME On u ! .But hell who doesnt like the idea of veggie in the shower I would love to help him release *hentai grin* YUP I dare to dream. Anyways I love it ur doing a great job ! UPDATE PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot and steamy and OHHH! I like! keep up the good work, I'd like to see what you have in store for everyone's fav couple! |
Reviewed By: catgokuh On: March 31, 2003 10:42 CST
Comment/Review:
where is the next chappy???
dont stop in the middle of the story
please please continue
very good story very good
want ending please
meow |
Reviewed By: ArchDuke On: January 28, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely awesome! You did very well explaining how Vegeta and Bulma first come together, and how they manage to stay together, considering that they're completely different people. Keep them comming! ^_^_b |
Reviewed By: Saiya On: January 26, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Black Dragon On: January 26, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well when is the next chapter are you torturing us on purpose or what?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
I wanna know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"knowledg is half the battle" |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 26, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooohhhh...... This is getting really good, Vegeta knows that if he does not complete the ritual that both he and Bulma will eventually die of need. As usual Vegeta resorts to training until he's nearly dead... what will we do with him? Anyway, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK SaiyanTrombone!!! |
Reviewed By: Piper On: January 26, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGHHHHH! YOU can't leave it there! I NEED MORE, DAMNIT! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhhh can't wait for the next one.... mmmmm what a way to wake up |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooo great story!!
DARNIT WHY DID YOU STOP IN THE MIDDLE OF A LEMON? X(
You could have at least finished it you know!! GRRRR
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 12:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh oh! What's gonna happen next? BTW the lemon was good! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just had to end it there didn't you. That was pretty darn good for a first lemon! I don't actually write lemons, I mean, hell I'm still a virgin, but this was good! Hurry with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
mmmmm continue.... pleeeeeaaaaaase |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 05:43 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good lemon for you first! Well ive never written a lemon so I guess i dont really know, ahh well! Good start. Thats not the end I hope? |
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