| "Princess WHO of WHERE?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: Princess Who of Where?
Reviewed By: FireBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, and I know its been a long time since I have first read it on ff.net. I love how you keep the characters to how they were on the show. I hope that you will post more but it seems that you have stopped posting chapters. I would love to find out what happens and how this ends, maybe you will come back to it one day? Also I noticed some spelling and typo errors that missed your attention, if you want I could beta this for you. This is just an amazing piece of fiction that is one of the few original creations. Most are remakes with different takes.
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Reviewed By: ali_+star On: December 13, 2004 16:55 CST
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very good u have 2 hurry up!!1 i wanna no what happens with every one well Tata
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Reviewed By: bleumagnolia On: October 31, 2004 05:56 CST
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Please oh please oh please!! *gets down on hands and knees* PLEASE update!
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Reviewed By: VeggiesBitch On: July 05, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. I felt so lucky that the day after I read the first 28? chapters you updated after not updating for a year!! I love the way you write and express emotion. I wish I wrote in similar ways as you do. Keep writing on any story I'll be one of many enjoying it!!! Thanks alot for listening me babble on about your story. Love alwayz and forever to my fellow writer peace out Raven
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Reviewed By: FoxFireK On: June 23, 2004 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Thank you so much for updating, I had almost given up hope. All I can say is I loved it and thank you. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Ice_queen664 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:57 CDT
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Thank god u've written another chapter its been so long !!! oo well it was gud continue!!
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Reviewed By: kbizzle On: June 18, 2004 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was gr8 i love how bulma has abilities and strengths of her own and vegeta doesnt seem so WIMPY as of in other fanfics of this assortment!:o)! im still kinda confused when krillin explained everything...could u emphasize a lil bit more for muah cus i kept reading it and it wasnt coming together! 4 kisses~ 3hugs~ 2fingers~1love KBIZZLE
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Reviewed By: Callista Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi... It's good to finally have a update on this... It must be at least 6 months since I've seen a new chapter... :) Loved the chapter... Hope you update soon again... Huggies, ~Callista Moon~
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 19:03 CDT
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YES! He proposed! And u finally updated! Is Goku gonna fall in luv with Chi-Chi, or with one of the girls he's stayin with? I hope he finds Bulma soon! Update!
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Reviewed By: Sayianwanabe On: May 07, 2004 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like3 ur writing. you nmake it so surprising and i cant wait til you finish it.
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Reviewed By: PMRGchik [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm so glad I finally found this fic again. I almost cried when fanfiction.net took it off and I have been looking ever since. Love the story.
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Title: All chapters
Reviewed By: FireBlade(not signed in) On: December 25, 2003 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, damn this is really good, I love how you protrayed Bulma in the last chapter, as a child in ways when she got her changing ability back, poor Vegeta tho, he wants to sleep for have 'fun' and she wants to do something else, Awesome storu I can't wait to read more!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: foxfirek On: December 17, 2003 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok maybe my rating was a little unorigional but I love your story, I cant believe you have gotten so few reviews for it. I started reading your story back when it was on fanfiction.net and have been hooked sense. I wish you would update soon, its a great story and I cant wait to see what will happen with Goku and with bulma's heritage. I wish ff.net had not erased your story it took me a long time to find it over again, I missed it so much I kept searching the web until I finally found it. Your story is the most origional of all the stories I have read and has a great plot. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnnaMay-Ker On: December 05, 2003 18:41 CST
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i love the story, please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Rosilienne Dawn (aka Adri) On: September 09, 2003 15:02 CDT
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I hope you can get back online soon, this is one of my top favorite stories and I'd really like to see it to the end :D |
Reviewed By: AnnaMay-Ker On: September 03, 2003 17:28 CDT
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i love the story but please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this freakin' story sooo much. Please hurry with te next chapter, I might die, please don't make me die!!;)~ |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 11:33 CDT
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I haven't checked up on this story for updates in awhile, I had almost forgot it existed, THAT'S how long you've been away since your last update! Anyway, I'm glad you updated, I was begging to worry that you had given up writing this. Don't make the next update too long! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 11:36 CDT
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Sorry, that's my mistake, I was BEGINING to worry you had given up on writing this story. Anyway, like I said before, UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: TJ On: June 29, 2003 05:19 CDT
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Another great chapter - i can't wait to see what happens next
thanks |
Reviewed By: Ice_queen664 On: June 24, 2003 04:45 CDT
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That was really good you need 2 update sooner though |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to 2 say that I LUVED IT!!! IT WAS WONDERFUL!! U MUST UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nicka On: June 16, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter but you need to update sooner. |
Reviewed By: Alan On: June 16, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so mean! Here I was enjoying reading your story and preparing to stay up all night because I was so hocked and IT STOPPED! *Whimper* *Whimper* *Whine* *Whine*
I was about to beg you to write more, but luckly I caught myself. I NEVER beg! You have to kill me first. But I will ask nicely. So, would you please write more as quickly as possible so that I don't have to carry out any death threats that my evil side is urging me to threaten you with. *baka evil side* Your story is wonderful. I am really enjoying all the shapeshifting. Sincerly,
Alan (A Loyal Admirer, Ne?) |
Reviewed By: Alan On: June 16, 2003 20:25 CDT
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I just started the chapter that begins with the hearing or counsil or whatever. The thing with the escaping bull? I was so tickled that I couldn't wait to finish the story to comment. That Bull scene is almost identical to a scene in Arrow's Fliught by Mercades Lackey! Did you know that? Any way story's awesome and I'll just get back to reading now. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 11:48 CDT
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Still loving the fic. PLEASE don't take so long to update next time!!! I was begining to think you'd quit the story.... Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Nicka On: May 12, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for letting me now when ff.net deleated your fic those bastards. I love this story and please update soon. Also would you let me know when you updae please? Thanks. |
Reviewed By: Rhanea Hiroshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Booya woman! Screw FF.NET! Update HERE! I like it plenty fine, if it would just load faster *grumble*...Anywhoodle, please update more, ffnet's gotten too big for its britches and is trying to hard--yet not enough--to please everyone. You'd be better off posting your stories here anyway, less rules and less bitchy people...Good luck with everything and pleeeeeeeeease new chapter? *gives puppy eyes* pwease?? Dun leave me hanging like this!!! |
Reviewed By: Missy On: May 08, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because I think its super nifty!!! No but seriously. When are ya gonna update? I really miss it. And you havnt updated lately. Sorry. I just feel like rantin and ravin. Later!! Pleasse update soon!!
Missy |
Reviewed By: Lady Adira On: May 03, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! More! please more! I soooo love this fic!
And i wasn't joking. It's really well written, and i read every single chapter and i enjoy it a lot :)
Is Vegeta going to find our about her being the princess? Is his father going to tell him? And what about that book she found on top of Vegeta's bed? Is that going to come back into the story?
Hmmm, so many questions, so few answers...
Please update soon :D |
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