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 Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2003 07:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok that last little comment with Zechs on the phone... "Hello General" Oh dear god, but that really cracked me up. You realize you'll have to do a sequel now, ne? *nudge nudge* I liked the Epilogue. It is nice to see the boys happy. =^_^=
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: February 11, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay if I could I would give you all fifteens but hey the rating system is screwed up. *shrugs* Now.....pleasepleaseplease make another sequel for Treize and Zechs you have to! I promise if you do I will reviw every chapter you post! Pleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: AMG  On: February 11, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD! ^_______^ KAWAIINESS AND YUMMY LEMONY GOODNESS ALL THE WAY! I LOVE IT! YOU DID AWESOMELY GOOD! ^-^ Oyasumi Nasai!
 Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 11:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Did you know your evil? Well you are. The story was great of course, but now I want to read more. To know who General is. I beg of you to tell me. It will nag my consciousness if I don't know. Please!
Arigato, James
 Reviewed By: Suzume Tori  On: February 07, 2003 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! YAY! I LOVE IT! **dances in happy fluffland** WHEEE!!!! YAY! YAYAYAY! IT ENDED HAPPYYY!

awright :p I go workie now... **slinks away looking guilty** ^^;;
 Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2003 05:16 CST
Comment/Review:
-swoons- ahhhh. Happy ending happy ending. I love happy endings. that was soo great. Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
 Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2003 07:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Hei !!! So I was right... Zechs was the guy !! I knew it !!!

Now, come back with the epilogue, I want to see this couple happy !!!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: February 06, 2003 06:21 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello me again. I hope you write that epilogue soon cause this is an absolutely fantastic fanfiction. I loved reading it and I hope you enjoyed writing it! Finsih this fic with a flourish and it will be perfect!
Love Ya,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan  On: February 06, 2003 04:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWooooooHHHHHoooooooooo,...at last it's finish,...*hugs*...AAAAnnndddddd with a VVVVeeeryyyyyyyy HHHHaaappppyyyyyy and Veeeerryyyyyyy SSSaaaapppyyyy EEEnnnddiingggg,.......*sniff,sniff*.....*gave a big-box of pokky to shenlong-sama*...*grins*...
i LLLooooooovveeeeeee happy-ending,....and yours're SSSoooooooo SSSweeeeetttt,...*ssssigghhhhhhh*...please hurry-up with the Epilogue kay,...and keep-up the good work,...MMMooooreeeee YYYuuuummmmmyyyyyyyy LLLLLeeeemmooonnnnn PPiieeeeeee,....*hentai grins*...^.~...
till then,...JJJaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbbaateeeeeeee-Neeeeee!!^.~!!
 Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2003 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Wah!!!!!!! You can't leave off like that!!!1 You gotta update again soon! Thsi is too good to make us wait for the next part!!
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: February 04, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dang it you can't end the story there it is just starting to get good you annoying person! I think writers personally tease us just to make us come back reading, but half the people I know keep reading without the Damn SUSPENSE!! Anywho write again soon.
Love,
Aria
 Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 02, 2003 18:15 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hei, nice fic !! I like it !!

I read "Call Me?" at another site, and then I found this sequel here... I'm enjoying it, keep up the good work.

I think I have a pretty good idea of what is going to happen... Well, you mentioned Zechs in the first fic, he was the one that gave Heero the idea to call...

And here, in the first chapter, Duo has a costumer called Lightning... is he Zechs?? I bet he is !!!

If you are going to involve Zechs in all of this, this fic is going to be great. I think that maybe you should give Quatre and Trowa more chances to appear. Maybe Heero could tell them about Duo, since they are friends... aren't they? Then Zechs could find out and go for Duo...

Oh, there are so many possibilities... I'm sure that whatever you are going to write will be great !!!

Wonderful fic, lots of lemons !!!

Don't keep us waiting, give us the next chapter soon...
 Reviewed By: Aria  On: February 01, 2003 07:17 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Duo's company found out didn't they? oh no oh no oh no oh no! *Watches their happiness come crashing down* You can't do that! Please write again soon you have to continue this story!! Please make it a happy ending too!
 Reviewed By: Goldy Gems  On: January 26, 2003 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work! This is one of the best fics I have read in a while!
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan  On: January 26, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOOhhhh,....SSSSoooooo HHooootttt,...continue soon,...and MMMooreeeeee SSSSteeaaammyyyyyyyyy LLLLeeeemmoonnnnnnn,..OOnneeeggaaaai??,....till next chapter,....JJJJaaaaaaaaaa and GGGGaaaanbbbaaaateeeeee-Neeeeee!!^_~!!
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