| "A Simple Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: April 11, 2003 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I hope you continue that story! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 07:03 CST
Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!!! YAHAYYYYY!!!!!! What a lovely wittle ending!!!! WAHOO!!!! WAYHAY!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!
Bakura:....done with your caturwauling yet?
^___________^ Yep!!!!! *glomps him*
Bakura: @()@ Can't... breathe... X____X
WWWWEEEEEE!!!!! LOVE YOUR FICCY JUST POPPIN' OFF TO DA CHIP SHOP BEFORE I REVIEW MORE FICCIES!!!! *pops out glomping everyone along the way*
Seto: *get's glomped* X____X
Ryou: *get's glomped* X_____X
Yami and Yugi: *get's glomped* ^__________________^
Tea: *get's bashed with mallet* X_____________@
WEEEE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelofDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREATI think there should be more stories like that and they should make into a show! It really touched me when Bakura was nice to Ryou, and when Yami slept with Yugi(a bit gross tho). This is funny tho- everything that hurt Ryou, Yami would send it to the Shadow Realm.LOL. But it was a great story!
AngelofDeath |
Reviewed By: YamiBakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
this story wuz the best!!! i just feel really bad 4 ryou. all that HAS to hurt in the morning
anyway write more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelofDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
i lke it its coolu no my frend has a club at skool and its all 4 yugioh they rite stories by themselves u wood fit perfectly ur stori was GREAT |
Reviewed By: ardhrianna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked how it turned out in the end, especially Ryou realizing that Bakura is the "right yami" for him.
Write more. NOW!
*innocent smile* |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 06, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOO...MORE PLEASE interesting... yeah. ^_^ Ja! |
Reviewed By: ? On: February 06, 2003 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read something like this before , but
this is WAY better. Please keep writing!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You cant leave it like that! Its to good!!! |
Reviewed By: Zoey On: February 06, 2003 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic drew me in and held my attention. It is very engrossing, especially for someone whose favorite character in yugioh is Ryou. I'll be waiting for the next part :) |
Reviewed By: AMG On: January 30, 2003 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This is just getting funky. But it's really cool! I love it! Please have more very very soon! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: yamianimewriterd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Much better! Really feel sorry for Yugi in this chapter. Looking forward to seeing what Ryou is going to do now... |
Reviewed By: pingpong(not logged in) On: January 29, 2003 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
pingpong- those AN are a mucho no-no in the middle of the stories...as a word of advice. Luv the story and u need 2 continue. PLZ? |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work and I can't wait for more! U R SO AWESOME JADESABER! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, no "author's notes" inside the story! I'd like to track down whoever started that little trend and sic Yami Bakura on them... Grr. |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 28, 2003 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!! WAAAAA!!! I wanna know what happens!! Pretty pwease?!! MORE MORE MORE!!! SOOOON! ^______^ Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_~ |
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