| "Wages of Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: LS On: January 31, 2003 23:43 CST
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I like the way this AU Yamcha's thieving tendencies echo the anime-Yamcha's old 'highwayman' ways. I look forward to more of this story. |
Reviewed By: LS On: January 31, 2003 23:28 CST
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I like the last line, teasing me into wanting to know more ^_~...very effective. I like the way you are using the rearview mirror for interaction...it is very 'natural' & easy to visualize. I like when Vegeta growls "driving, woman." ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: January 30, 2003 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Ku, I think you've got something here. I've never read anything like it, so of course I can't wait to see how the rest developes. Let me know when you update ok? |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: January 29, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far please continue it sounds very promising. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:05 CST
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Unique and different and I love the flow. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bardock: "Why have you given this fic such a high rating???" Because it's great, I'm really enjoying it..."But I'M not in it!!!" Well, you can't be in all of them..."But, I'm sexy!! I'm Gokus dad!!! WHY do people ignore me so much???" They don't mean to dear...you were only in a couple of episodes of the actual series..."HEY!! I got my own special missy!!It's a very original idea, she could easily fit me in there somewhere!!" Don't pout Bardock, it's very unbecoming..NOW where are you going??? *Bardock flounces off in a huge huff...upset at being so cruelly ignored, by so many.* Great start to the fic Ku!! I can't wait to read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 04:27 CST
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Wow! What an interesting start. I like the characterization, and the fluidity of your descriptions. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a truely great start to this fic and I love it just as much keep up the good work and I want to read more |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 28, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes...I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a VERY PROMISING story...very orginal. You are so descriptive. It's really wonderful, Ku. |
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