"Wages of Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Puar On: February 05, 2003 21:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Mmm very intriguing. I'm waiting around for the third chapter. Get to it hippy. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 04, 2003 18:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great update! So it's the dragonballs that they're after...can't wait to see what's gonna happen next ^_^. Veggie is such a sly fox, already putting the moves on Bulma ^_~. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:42 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is turning out to be a great story |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 21:39 CST Comment/Review: I like when she first sees his dark eyes...very effective hmmmm ^_~...and I love when he says "Maybe I don't want to." {my knees go weak too ha! *^_^*}...Great chapter, I am enjoying this story! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: February 02, 2003 21:37 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hmmmm...so this is all about the dragonball, huh? I'm hooked for sure now! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 20:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, Ku, it's only Chapter 2 and I'm already hooked! It sounds like this fic is going to be jam-packed with intrigue, action, lots of smoldering looks between Bulma and Vegeta (hopefully more than just looks, ok?) and lots of mystery and excitement.
What a neat idea to pull the DBZ gang into a Bonnie and Clyde-like story. I can't wait to see where it all heads next. |
Reviewed By: LS On: January 31, 2003 23:43 CST Comment/Review: I like the way this AU Yamcha's thieving tendencies echo the anime-Yamcha's old 'highwayman' ways. I look forward to more of this story. |
Reviewed By: LS On: January 31, 2003 23:28 CST Comment/Review: I like the last line, teasing me into wanting to know more ^_~...very effective. I like the way you are using the rearview mirror for interaction...it is very 'natural' & easy to visualize. I like when Vegeta growls "driving, woman." ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: January 30, 2003 02:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow Ku, I think you've got something here. I've never read anything like it, so of course I can't wait to see how the rest developes. Let me know when you update ok? |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: January 29, 2003 12:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it so far please continue it sounds very promising. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:05 CST Comment/Review: Unique and different and I love the flow. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 06:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Bardock: "Why have you given this fic such a high rating???" Because it's great, I'm really enjoying it..."But I'M not in it!!!" Well, you can't be in all of them..."But, I'm sexy!! I'm Gokus dad!!! WHY do people ignore me so much???" They don't mean to dear...you were only in a couple of episodes of the actual series..."HEY!! I got my own special missy!!It's a very original idea, she could easily fit me in there somewhere!!" Don't pout Bardock, it's very unbecoming..NOW where are you going??? *Bardock flounces off in a huge huff...upset at being so cruelly ignored, by so many.* Great start to the fic Ku!! I can't wait to read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 04:27 CST Comment/Review: Wow! What an interesting start. I like the characterization, and the fluidity of your descriptions. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 22:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a truely great start to this fic and I love it just as much keep up the good work and I want to read more |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 28, 2003 21:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yes...I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a VERY PROMISING story...very orginal. You are so descriptive. It's really wonderful, Ku. |
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